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Onslaught King
02-07-2008, 11:53 PM
Sup, to everyone viewing this thread. I call this "THE FIX", because you can come here and get your FIX of random manga stories produced by yours truly. I've decided to post this, because I guess I have too much inspiration than I know what to do with. So whether your a manga/anime fan, inspiring mangaka, or if you just like a good story this is the place for you. (Remember these stories are random, and are my very own thoughts.) ENJOY!!!!:thumbup:

karuru
02-08-2008, 04:13 PM
Thats a really nice story and i love the description ^^
[hmm it might just be me but i had really 'iffy' thoughts when i first read 'YOU are a very very bad boy. Daddy's been lookin all ova for you' .. but it could just be because i had finished some 'researching' *ahem* @__@]

Onslaught King
02-18-2008, 05:56 PM
It's time for a second dose of THE FIX!!! (Please remember that these are random stories and may not have a contination unless requested.:D) Enjoy!!!!

Blood Rush

The Beginning (Vol. 1)

"Forgive me father for I have sinned." Inside of a Chatholic monestary on the outskirts of a remote town one man prays. "The lord has given you your share of forgiveness my son," says the minister as he steps from behind the red curtains. Candles flicker as he approaches the knealing man. "Why do you intend to linger in this world? Your fate was decided the moment you were born." says the minister who now stands before the praying man. "Is that how you greet an old friend?" asks the knealing man. "No, that's how I greet you Mr. Seth Rush." the minister says with distain. Seth Rush stands to his feet and they both come face to face. "So.....how is your faith these days father?" asks Seth with a grin. The minister smiles and places a wrinkled right hand on Seth's shoulder. "As strong and stuborn as always," he replies. The two men laugh and take a seat on one of the marble benches.

"Father you know what I have come for," Seth says while looking up at the massive sculpture of Jesus mounted at the front. "Well I had a feeling this day would come. And I truly hoped that it wouldn't come, but this world needs you more than ever now you know that right?" asks the minister who heads towards the Jesus sculpture. "So I've heard," responds Seth. "You've heard? You don't have to hear these days my boy. No no, now you can look outside and see it staring back at you with those eyes." shouts the minister. "Those eyes, those evil eyes filled with nothing but murderous intend," he continues as he pulls out a long object covered in white cloth and wrapped in thousands of miniature crucifixs. He hands it to Seth Rush who unwraps the object. "I dreaded the day when I had to place that back into your hands," says the minister as he backs away. "I'm truly sorry for giving you the burden of keeping it. Especially, since I was retired and all," says Seth with a smirk. "No no my child you were never retired. Just merely placed on hold until the time was most dier," respones the minister.

As the final cross and cloth wrapping is taken off a Long Style Katana is revealed. A black shealth with 1,000 symbols engraved into it. Seth pulls the Katana from it's shealth and every candle in the church suddenly is extingished. The bright steel of the katana is the only light that illuminates the building. "As beautiful and as demonic as ever. Now p-put it away Seth just p-p-put it away NOW," says a terrified minister. Seth quickly returns the blade to it's shealth and every candle is once again lit. "Thank you again old friend. And I hope that next time we meet it'll be under better circumstances," says Seth as he walks towards the door. His long white hair symbolizes his veteran status, his black trench coat hides his dark past, and his long katana speaks for itself. "Seth Rush........god loves you even if your not worthy of his kingdom," whispers the old minister to himself as he clentchs at the crucifix around his neck.

"God loves you!!!"

to be continued..................

K.O.Cutie
02-18-2008, 07:14 PM
Why aren't you a mangaka yet? You got the stories now put it together kay? And next time i want pictures:p.
Can't wait for the next one. See ya see ya.:thumbup:

MangaAddict
02-18-2008, 08:03 PM
Try to keep things in one thread...

Onslaught King
02-23-2008, 04:45 AM
More of what you want from your's truly, on "The Fix".

The story so far......
Seth Rush, a retired Soul Stalker, has returned to the United States inorder to lend his assistance in the fight against evil. After retrieving his Long Style Katana from an old friend, he wastes no time in the search for the root of the Soul Beast epidimic. It is during this search that Seth discovers he may have bitten off more than he can chew.

The Face of Evil (Vol. 2)

The Soul Stalker, a human hybrid being who has devoted his or her body to the Elder Counsel inorder to engage a Soul Beast in combat. They are entirely human, but are intrusted with the abilities and weapons that were originally created by Soul Beasts themselves. In order to utilize these weapons every Stalker is trained to maintain a perfect chemical balance between both their emotional and biological enviornment. Otherwise they lose control and become Soul Beasts themselves. Since it usually takes years of perfection to accomplish this equally balanced state, the Soul Training Academy of National Defense (S.T.A.N.D) have been established thoughtout the world, but has not been accepeted by foreign countries like Japan. This chemical arrangement allows control of the body's most important compound, adrenaline. Adrenaline acts as a source of power, which activates various demonic symbols inscribed all over the Stalker's bodies. Although much research and development is used to produce these hunters, only the most exceptional Soul Stalkers survive a Soul Beast encounter.

Humming of a sleek style silver tone motorcycle fills the air as Seth Rush flows through traffic on a busy expressway. "Mr. Rush?" echoes from Seth's ear piece. "Yes?" Seth responds. "You are currently in the vicinity of your target," announces the speaker. "What is the targets current status?" asks Seth. "The target has entirely converted into a Soul Beast form and has now reached level 5. Approach with caution, and the highest order has been proclaimed by the Counsel to eliminate all signs of the creature. Do you understand?" relays the speaker. "Yes, please have a cleanup crew on route in...," Seth takes a look at the time on his motorcycle. "about 10 to 15 minutes. Is that understood?" he responds. "10 minutes? Someone's getting rusty." states the speaker. Seth smirks as he swerves towards the next lane, then off the expressway.

Pulling in front of an abandon building Seth steps off his bike, but only his shadow touches the ground as he leaps to the top of the building. Inside, a yound girl with blonde hair is curled in a corner as fear runs through her mind. On the opposite side of the room a thin man is crouched over the corpse of another child. The small girl continues to cry as she can't help put keep her eyes on the beast as it devours the chunks of flesh. The beast suddenly takes it's attention from the corpse to the fresh weeping meal. "Louder...louder...I love it when they cry," whispers the beast as he begins a mad dash towards the girl. "SHHHHHHHHIIIINNNG," cuts the scream of the young girl and stops the soul beasts advance. "Sniff...sniff..," the beast moves toward the dark wooden wall. "SHHHHHCRRRAAAACCCKKKK," the blade of a katana rips through the wall and the beast's chest. On the other side of the wall Seth leans on the handle while watching the blood pour in from the opposite side. "Bingo!!" smiles Seth. The soul beasts eyes widen in surprise trying to slide it's body off of the sharp steel. "No, no have mer....," comes from the beast's throat before Seth pushes the blade upward slicing him in two.

Removing the blade from the wall Seth places it back into it's shealth. He looks at the little girl and can't help but feel pity for what she just experienced. "Tap..tap..tap.." comes from the hall behind Seth. Peering through the darkness Seth watches a man step out from the shadows holding two blades at his waist and one massive broad sword on his back. Without a second thought Seth unleashes his blade, letting it rip down the hallway. But just before the tip of his katana can reach the unknown enemies neck everything freezes. The katana at a length of 20 ft has stopped, Seth's white hair is subspended in midair, and even the little girl's tears pause before they can hit the ground. "That was pathetic. You'd think someone who shares the same blood as I could do better," proclaims the man as he takes a leap back. "Do you like my time blade? What....cat got your tongue?" says the stranger as he gives a motionless Seth a smirk. "Well if you like that, then have a taste of my Raiyoken (Thunder Point)," he removes his second blade from it's holder and touches the tip of Seth's katana. "SSSSSSSSSBOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM," A flash of light ignights the builting causing a massive eruption as it explodes. Bolts of lightening can be seen through the smoke. The stranger stands on the last remaining wall. "CAN YOU HEAR ME UNDER THERE? THE NAMES ETHAN, ETHAN RUSH. WELCOME BACK.........BROTHER!!!!!!" he announces.

Long after the shadowy character leaves a pair of large, black vehicles with the words Section 7 written on the bummper pull into the area. A woman with a pair of sharply dressed men step from the vehicles and view the damage. "MR. RUSH........ARE YOU THERE?" shouts the woman. Emerging from the rubble, Seth opens his coat revealing a fainted child. "Thank god your alive. Wouldn't want to lose you on your first day back huh?" she says while helpping dust Seth off. "The girl should be alive," he says. "And what of the target?" she asks. "Eliminated." responds Seth. "Then what's all this?" the woman asks as she looks at the damage. "That, well that's what you call a family reunion." says Seth as he gets into one of the vehicles. The confused woman motions for the men to begin the cleanup and enters the vehicle. "Well umm welcom..." she begins but is cut off. "Not right now. Let's go home!!" he says while leaning back. "Whatever you say boss," she says as the vehicle speeds off into the darkness.

to be continued.......... (Vol. 3 Hunt Authorized)

Onslaught King
02-25-2008, 12:27 AM
And another one from the Onslaught King.

The story so far....

Getting back into the swing of things, Seth Rush took out his target, saved a life, and found himself in the middle of a unexpected family reunion. Ethan Rush, brother of the legend, made his intentions known after attacking Seth in a test of strength. Now Seth Rush, after given the authorization, must hunt down his own brother and discover the source of the epidemic.

Hunt Authorized (Vol. 3)

The Soul Beast, an unrelenting creature formed from the fusion of one's soul with a demon. This theory has been contested for years by researchers who believe they are merely the result of a chemical experiment gone wrong by corrupt scientists. Unknown to the world, both theories hold some truth. Although soul beasts are originally created by the forceful joining of human and demon spirits, evidence has proven that experiments have been conducted under shady companies such as Silver Inc. A soul beast in general, holds both supernatural and demonic abilities that range from amplified strength to walking through walls. This depends upon the level of power they have achieved and the process of taking over a human host. If a host willingly gives him or herself, then the beast can reach unstable potential. This is a rare event since it mainly occurs in humans that are disturbed or have suicidial qualities, which is why most fusions occur forcefully causing the beast to gain power over time. Both types constantly release demonic energy during transformations by the eating of another human soul, which is why they can only be detected after devowering a victim.

Inside the headquarters of the Elder Counsel Seth Rush stands before his superiors. Twelve well aged men and three head counsel leaders. "As the head of this counsel let me be the first to welcome you Seth Rush. You've been reinstated into the ranks. Now stand ready, we shall restore your markings," announces the head elder. Two women dressed in black shrouds remove every piece of clothing on Seth's body as the entire counsel stands to their feet. Holding out their hands towards Seth they all resite the ancient text of the old world. The lights dim and the walls shake as the prayers grow louder. "We the counsel once again endow you with the power of our forefathers, do you accept?" asks the head elder. "I Seth Rush accept this power," replies Seth. The dark markings creep their way down the stone walls then climb onto the skin. Burning themselves into his flesh Seth Rush's body is now covered in tatoos of the many dead soul beasts he's extingished throughout his career.

As the women redress Seth one places a green glowing stalker amulet around his neck. "What is this?" asks Seth. "That there is a your amulet. We no longer permit the killing of a soul beast until it is confirmed that the human soul cannot be saved. You Seth will subdue the beast, then use that very amulet to excorcise the beast from the victims body. It can also detect the presence of the beasts," explains the elder. "We live in a new world Seth. You can no longer go around killing these things at will anymore, understood?" asks the elder. "Whatever it takes," says Seth Rush as he walks towards the door. "Also, the hunt has been authorized. You may return to Section 7, aquire your hunting party, then begin the search as soon as possible. And remember Seth, Ethan Rush is no longer your brother," commands the elder. "No....he will always be my brother, and he will die that way," proclaims Seth Rush walking out the doors. The third elder looks in the direction of the head. "Should we have informed him of the third?" he asks. "No, it is best that he focuses on taking care of one brother first," finishes the elder. "The three Rush brothers will meet soon enough"

to be continued....... (Vol. 4 Blade v.s Blade v.s Blade)

Onslaught King
03-23-2008, 08:07 PM
(This is an original story created and already patented by Onslaught King. These stories and more can be found on "THE FIX". Feel free to reply, but please do not continue this story. Also, for any critic suggestions, please PM me. This way other readers can continue to enjoy this story for the first time.)

The Story So Far
After reawakening his dormat powers, that have been resting for 10 years, Seth Rush has been rewritten into the ranks of the soul stalkers. With the hunt authorized he is teamed with section 7 to find and eliminated any possible threat to mankind. Unfortunatly, that current threat is none other than his brother Ethan Rush who's protecting the demon king Letear. But even more disturbing is the rumors of a third sibling..........

Blade v.s Blade v.s Blade (Vol. 4)

From the shadows Seth Rush emerges carrying his long style katana. His white long hair drapes over his black trench coat, which covers his muscular body. He walks firmly futher stepping into the light revealing his dark boots and pants. "Hmmmmmm, still holding on to the old style I see. How do you do it?" taunts a smirking Ethan Rush also completely revealing himself. His body structure is that of his brother. His short white hair, blue fur vest, and dark blue pants pale in comparison to the massive broad sword strapped to his spine. The only thing keeping him balanced are two katana's that dangle from his torso one white one black. "Forgive me if I'm out of style, but that's far beyond my focus at this moment," responds Seth as they both slowly circle each other.

Five hours before contact.......

Rain falls on the fallen bodies of dead soul stalkers covering the street. With a thump of the pavement another is added to the body count while Ethan stands infront of the head quaters of section 7. "COME OUT DEAR BROTHER. THERE IS NO NEED TO HUNT ME DOWN I'M RIGHT HERE!!!!," he shouts seeing more stalkers dash out to fight. They all suddenly stop where they stand as a thunder bolt lights the sky. And from the roof, like a reaper swooping to claim a soul, Seth Rush crashes down on his brother with god-like force sending them both into the catocomes below the city.

The rank smell, dark design, and sound of things running in the shadows fills their senses as they dash wildly at one another. "SHHHHHBBBBOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!" both their blades connect sending them flying in opposite directions of one another. "ENOUGH!!" shouts Ethan slamming his Katana into the ground covered in sewer water. "My Raiyoken shows no mercy brother," he says staring down the tunnel. "Neither does my Heaven Slash," responds Seth staring back at his brother. "RRRAAIIYYOOKKENN!!" Ethan screams allowing a flash of thunder to scream down the tunnel charring everything in it's path. The intense light engolfs everything including Ethans eyes. When his vision returns he feels the slightest of water droplets crashing down on his forehead. He looks up in horror as he witnesses his brother Seth standing in midair above him pointing that long katana towards him. The length of Seth's katana touches Ethan's forehead. Ethan smiles and drops his weapon. "But can you do it?" Ethan whispers to his brother. "HEAVEN'S SLASH!!!!" yells Seth sending a hurricane of air down the tunnel. Ethan tried hanging on, but was overtaken by thousands of deep slashes placed over every inch of his body.

The ripped body lays still on the water's surface with only the face left partially reconizable. "cough....cough...i-it..doesn't matter...hehe...ough," mutters the corpse as pieces slowly float down the tunnel stream. "T-There will be....others...ough...cough...another will take my place...brother...ugh," shouts Ethan as one half of his face is seperated. Seth Rush turns and walks down the dark tunnel side. "Then I'll be waiting."


End........?

(Created By Onslaught King. Thank You all for reading and I hope you'll be buying the manga version when published.)