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Dollface
07-29-2009, 09:26 AM
I see something special in your eyes
It's not ashamed to hide itself
It appears dauntless through day and night
It over comes the darkness and shines is seen in the light
Hatred, grief and regret can fill the heart
But with love and hope you are surely to get through
Heals reminiscences of the past
Someday you'll truly find your true self
Come with me and together will fight the dark forces
That wants to put us in a quagmire while it clenches us
As long as you keep on believing
You'll find yourself flying towards the star
Until then you feel free and nothing can ever hurt you
You're invincible from sun to moon.

Dollface
07-29-2009, 09:35 AM
I’m dreaming of a blessed day
Where my dreams come true
The glorious feeling it gives me
Just how cathartic it is to my soul
Could this be a new beginning?
I feel like falling asleep
In sweet and tender oxidation
Clean my soul, fill my thoughts with love
Fill my thoughts with love
Never again should I be drowned in anguish
You made my dark dreams dissolve
Revealed my face to the light
You took me in your hands

Must I’ve been dreaming a dream?
I hope this is really real
Not just another hallucination
Is it true that I’m actually disengaged?
I don’t feel myself drifting away
All the things that you have done for me
How you do it? It’s incredible
Clean my soul, fill my thoughts with love
Fill my thoughts with love
Never again should I be drowned in anguish
You made my dark dreams dissolve
Revealed my face to the light
You took me in your hands

I can’t even remember the day
I received mercy or empathy
I was so lost and confused
Until you came you revealed to me
That I was far more
Than what the world assumed
You kept me under your wing
Clean my soul, fill my thoughts with love
Fill my thoughts with love
Never again should I be drowned in anguish
You made my dark dreams dissolve
You took me in your hands

Why would you save someone like me?
Who doesn’t deserve your presents?
Or never gave thought of you?
I sometimes want to secrete in my shame
But you kept me anyways
No one can ever emulate your love
You are the power that owns all

Throughout my life I’ve been falling
Endlessly through the black abyss
Nowhere to be seen or heard
But that’s when you exposed yourself
You took me in your arms
And pulled me away
From all of the quagmires
Clean my soul, fill my thoughts with love
Fill my thoughts with love
Never again should I be drowned in anguish
You made my dark dreams dissolve
Revealed my face to the light
You took me in your hands

Clean my soul, fill my thoughts with love
Fill my thoughts with love
Never again should I be drowned in anguish
You made my dark dreams dissolve
Revealed my face to the light
You took me in your hands
As long as I believe in you
I shall not parish
You showed me
There is nothing to be afraid of
I’m not in a dream
This actually is a new beginning
A new door to a new life
All this I happening suddenly
Clean my soul, fill my thoughts with love
Fill my thoughts with love
Never again should I be drowned in anguish
You made my dark dreams dissolve
Revealed my face to the light
You took me in your hands

I thank you with all of my heart
Because… you kept me.

ishxallxgood
07-29-2009, 01:32 PM
You are only allowed one thread for all your poetry. Your two threads have been merged. If you want the title of your thread changed PM me.

Dollface
07-29-2009, 01:54 PM
Oh! Is that so? I'm sorry. Thank you for telling me.

Jammerjoint
08-01-2009, 03:21 PM
First off, I'd like to ask that you avoid changing the color of your text whenever possible. I used to do so myself, and I've learned that it's painful to the eyes for someone not using the same forum skin as you.

The Light in your Heart is seemingly without direction or focus. And before even that, I notice that your grammar needs some significant mending...watch your subject-verb agreement and use of proper parts of speech. Although, the last line did strike me in good taste.

Dollface
08-01-2009, 08:58 PM
i get what you are saying. The first poem was a random scene in my head and I breathlessly written the words down. Thanks for telling me this stuff.