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Excel-Kleinwald
09-21-2007, 04:20 PM
Diary Holders:
1 *DEAD END ACHIEVED*
2 *DEAD END ACHIEVED*
3 Ayane Ashiya = MangaAddict ~writing diary~
4 Ludis Excloud = SilverKunai ~the "road" diary
5 *DEAD END ACHIEVED*
6 Karin Watanabe ~Game Diary~ *DEAD END*
7 Sylvia Gin Okayama = Chezkimo ~the manga diary~
8 Ephrem Yale = Excel-Kleinwald ~the personal diary~
9 Yukio Watanabe ~Fear Diary~
10 Saki Shibayama = Alberio ~the workaholic diary~
11 Harai Saro = Raijuu ~Nocturn Diary~
12 Zan Kudou = the_kid ~the devil diary~ (3 denials left)
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CHARACTERS:

Name: Ayane Ashiya
Number: 3
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: Short blonde hair, tall
Diary: A written diary. It updates every morning, but gives a very detailed discription of whats going to happen to her and the things she will see and encounter.
Bio: Relatively popular high schooler. She has many friends and good grades. Her parents are always away on business so she stays at home alone. She loves to talk and she can sometimes be arrogant. Shes smart and pretty independent. She kept a detailed diary which she wrote in every night. She wants to be a writer and she wants to eventually write about her life. She hopes for excitement... until deus...
Name: Ludis Excloud

Number: The 4th.

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Appearance: Ludis has bluish green hair, not too long or short. His eyes are a normal brownish black and his expression is mostly serious. Around 5'10

Diary: The "Road" Diary. A diary within a cell phone. Not too original but its powers are.... interest, to say the least. The diary updates every hour or so and the descriptions are mostly normal, but the big predictions(Large change of life) are in riddles. The special part about this diary is its strange 'Dead Ends'. The Dead Ends have two descriptions, It describes two ways to lead to the End. One is a false End, and the other is the truth.

Bio: Ludis has been a quiet person and mostly talks when things are either asked, or in his interest. He doesn't usually start conversations, or end them. He just adds to them. You could probably see him near the trees most of the time in the shade, looking at his cell phone. His grades are average but his future is really unclear. His choices are usually default and normal.
Name: Karin Watanabe
Number: #6
Age: 17
Diary: ~Game Diary~ A handhold gameboy she carries around everywhere. Every time she plays it. Her future will happen in the game. She can choose to save her future in the game. If she saves it. The future will happen and she will wait a day for a new one. Or to turn it off and wait until the next day. When the next day comes she will get a new future. If she continues to play the game. Without saving. And dies. DEAD END.
Personality: A tomboy. Loves to play games. Gets good grades. Karin ever since a child has been along. With only few friends. She has been moved to many foster families and has recently been released. She continues to go to school on her last year. One day she found a gameboy by her apartment door and started playing it. Soon to find her future. She is a new exchange student in japan. Recently moved to find peace. Naomi bought an apartment close to the high school and soon starts her new day.

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Name: Sylvia Gin Okayama
Number: #7
Age: 19
Diary: ~Manga Diary~ Shows what happens in the next 10 minutes per 2 pages by manga pictures and even though future events can be changed, her manga book can go upto 200 pages, so she can read the future (if she has time) to upto 2000 minutes.
Back ground info: She has had many Admirers as people think that Sylvia in genral is very pretty and beautiful. she usually wears a butterfly in her hair.she had already gone to school and college and now with that finished she works in her parents tea shop, which happens to be hugely successful and has spread alot. with the large amount of spare time she has she started drawing her days in manga form since she was 15, as she was very good at drawing, and has made many books with drawings of her life. then one day all fo a sudden in the new book she was going to draw in there were already pictures o her drawn. but pictures of the future....
Hmm...

Name: Ephrem Yale

Age 17
Description: A tall, lanky, and pale British boy.
Background: Moved to Japan with family, an only child who always kept to himself and his journal diary. Not much is known about him since he doesn't do much but observe those around him.

He holds the Personal Diary (8), it will show the actions within a full 24 hour of specific people, if he writes in the name of someone it will focus on that person. If he writes into "search" then it will show the names of everybody around him and vague descriptions of their actions.
Character Name: Saki Shibayama
Number: #10
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Appearance:
http://images.wikia.com/dothack/images/e/ec/Kamui_rl_t.jpg

Diary: ~*Workaholic's diary*~ A PDA diary that has extensive entrys while still updating by every 10 minutes. Her diary can only fill out for the entire day, but after a day has passed, it stops for approximatly a few hours to half a day depending on her condition...

Bio: Saki was born into a middle class family, lived a normal life, got slightly above average grades in school, and went into college like most others did. She worked hard towards becoming a computer data anaylist she landed a job as a video game programmer, soon after completing college. Seeing the oppurtunity as a good chance to make some money, she accepted it fully knowing the conditions she was about to be pushed through.
Going throughout her job overworked but well paid, she started getting releifs to her stress from work, which she still works at. Now she is a chain smoker, and uses several anti-anxiety and anti-depressants such as Lexapro and Xanax to get through the day, and whenever in a office building, she uses nicotine patches to surpress her urge to smoke. Recently, she has met Deus when she gets home after a long day of work.

I thought the name of the diary would suit its abilities.^^
Character Name: Harai Saro
Number: 11
Gender: Male
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Diary: ~Nocturn Diary~ It only tells what people are doing at night. It might tell what a person saw in their dream (if that person suddenly woke up from the dream, like a nighmare). It only works through the day telling what its going to happen at night.(its a phone btw)
Bio: His mother and father died so he went to live with his aunt. He loved to stay awake at night and write in his diary about how the dark sky with the stars looked like, thats why he always was known as the lazy kid of his school because it was always sleeping through the classes. He is not usually not afraid of anything and is kind to others most of the time.


Name: Zan Kudou
Number:12
Age:19
Future diary:the devil's diary, it can predict someone's death.This diary come in the form of a black book.Not only does this diary predict someone's death it can tell what will happen before the death happens.Zan, a skinny yet fast boy found this diary on the floor when walking home.




Just some rules to make things simple:

Rules for Deus:

Whoever is Dueus will be the enforcer of rules.

Whoever is deus, even though is practically god is not allowed to kill anybody

whoever is deus can however, throw in some twists, make some special situations/surprises as long as it is approved. coz we can#'t have him say something like: "deus used his powers to make the world turn upsdie down unexpectantly"

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Rules for diary holders:

People, in order to enter must say what number they want to be - 1 to 12 (might extend it to 13 if we get more people. doubt that will happen though -_-) as well as they have to say what thoer diary does/what type EG escape diary ~ lets the owner know of all and any escape roots for the situation they're in.

No god diaries like ~god diary~"lets the user know of every little detail and tells them how to avert situation and klill diary owner". lets try and be creative.

also, you can't be going around killing diary owners left right and center.

first you have to state the number of the person and type DEAD END to challenge them
like so:

#10 ~DEAD END~
and wait for the person to reply. if that person doesn't reply within the same round with DECLINE, then you can make your move and that person automatically accepts.

but of course you don't HAVE to just go around challenging people. but then it will be hard for the RP to move on.

Lastly, no god playing. and give some background on your character as it might help. that's all.


Even though one has the choice of declining a DEAD END challenge each diary holder/ RPer can only decline challenges 4 times. i repeat FOUR times. after that, all DEAD END challenges are automatically accepted.

If you need to know the reason for this new rule as you think there is fault in it, contact chezkimo via personal message. If not, enjoy

Excel-Kleinwald
09-21-2007, 04:21 PM
Alright, we're going to need a deus soon enough... hmm I wonder if Greg would want the job :P

Also, if you would like me to put up a summary, just ask. And next is Alberio's turn.

Alberio
09-21-2007, 07:38 PM
I'll edit this post in a bit, I'm glad it was only a two-three hour wait...I thought everyone would be waiting all night on me. And for the next episode of Saki's odinary life...:D (seriously, I rp as if my character was the bystander, not Yukki) Still this post was a bit out of the ordinary.
If my internet is up on my laptop I'd be able to write the summary, but my dad is a Mr. Fix-it kind of guy who won't let me or any other human being help. T_T
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Saki had been walking for a few hours along the street. When she had been on her way to the subway entrance, she heard a scream that sounded like a teenager's voice. The area had been along the way, but another person had ran in that way. She looked inside to see two other teenagers, one walking towards a kneeling middle school boy, and the other who was not too far from him.

'This is like one of those movies where the hero saves the day, but I'm no hero and I don't want to get into this... She thought to herself, struggling on deciding whether or not to call the police. The middle school boy had been punched in the face, blood gashed out of his mouth and from the looks of the scene his tooth was almost loose, suddenly one of the highschool boys grabbed onto his tooth and his lips were moving.

Not being able to keep this on her conscious by simply walking away Saki called for the police, but she didn't see any cop cars on a road nearby.

'Oh s***, I hope they take this bluff', she got herself ready to run, even if not far with her lungs, check her diary to see what top do next, as suddenly the two teenagers ran down the rest of the alleyway. Apparently they took the bluff, but Saki didn't get too relieved in case they were waiting on the other side nearby the older apartments she was near. She walked up to the middle schooler, checking to see if he was okay.

"T-thanks", he mumbled shyly with a bit of blood hanging from his mouth.

"No problem, but I'm walking you out of here", she let him use her shoulder and set him out near th street as she came up to him. "What did you do to get those thugs on you?", she asked worried about him but trying to show a open attitude aside from her usual manner which she would've just said 'You alright?'

The boy explained that he supposedly "owed them money" but that was just their want for the extra cash. She brought him home and explained the situation to his parents, they were very grateful but she didn't care much because she had other things to do...She dully and sarcastically noted after the parents closed the door behind her, "My first day and already...this, I wonder if tommorow will be as exciting." When she got back home she took a shower and layed down on her couch with a huge migrane.

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I know I could've done better with this post, but eh....I think I might get her in another character's story if possible, after all she does have another day off.

Raijuu
09-21-2007, 08:38 PM
ill go but i have no idea whats going on much....
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The night was coming and Saro was still thinking about what Deus told him by the message
"It seems youre not the one after all."
He sighed "heh... i never wanted to play in this game to begin with. I should just let it go." He got home and went straight into his bedroom.
"I dont care if I become god or not...." He said while looking at his phone.

"Dead End is here! But why is it not showing in my phone?"

"I cant think straight so Ill take a walk for now"

"I found someone laying on the ground... he is almost dead. Another diary holder?"

"..... arrg I made no sense sometimes...." He got up and walked out of his house.

Alberio
09-21-2007, 08:47 PM
Pretty much of people's characters and some things that have happened...you sho8uld probably read the threads sometime to get comeplete sense of things.

Chez's- His character, is a stalker like girl who is like the type of girl friend who puts sugar in your gas if you break up with her and seems to like the_kid's character, and has the manga diary as well as seeming to be an experienced killer with a sword in her outfit....somewhere.

EK's- A character who likes MA's character and has a dad who likes his bro while he is the dissapointing son. He has a diary that can depict a certain person's actions and can see people's deaths. He wants(I need to check if he has) to kill his dad and has helped MA's character with escaping from the dude with the fear diary.

Ma's- The popular/beautiful highschool girl who fears bugs, was attacked earlier, and(more info to come)

Sk- His character has been in multiple conflicts with other users, and has had a bomber in his school attack him, while seeming to be the silent killer type character yet tries to keep their humanity.(again more info to come if needed)

the_kid- Seriously, I can't make much of it. He seems to be an ordinary person while the_kid tries to say he is a 'gangster', which really should only go to black people since white people who are like that tend to be nothing more than thugs, whenever something of battle oriented comes or he wants him to be cool.

MO- you've seen

Me- Saki is an overworked employee for a game company who just got two days off, she is practically s drug addict and smoker, and I've mostly gone through her normal life.

Strangely the 5th has had two references as a different person but I've let that slide for awhile now considering this is an rp and the numbers could easily be changed.

~cleared up, more added, etc if you need more~

Excel-Kleinwald
09-21-2007, 09:04 PM
More info on my character, he doesn't have a brother... but his Dad was basically flirting with MO's character and he got jealous so he killed his dad and staged it as a suicide.

Manga-Otaku
09-21-2007, 09:12 PM
What??

Raijuu
09-21-2007, 09:13 PM
..... wow thats messed up... anyway im gonna see if i can get Sk's charcter to a safe place since he is like dying or something while he tells his story on the way...

Manga-Otaku
09-21-2007, 09:18 PM
Can someone please attempt or by accidentally try to run me over when I'm outside? I can avoid my dead end if I can dodge it..

Alberio
09-21-2007, 09:19 PM
uh Rai, hes already killed his opponent, so do you mean that you're going to help him out later. Sorry, my mind is a bit boggled, that goes for my brother comment as well.

Mo I think EK meant that his dad was flirting with MA's character. My character would be the most likely canidate for MO's previous post, but I think you need to get some scenario you do to change that...since most characters are in their own story or just doing something else.

Raijuu
09-21-2007, 09:23 PM
yeah im going to help him... thats why my diary says "dead end but its not showing up" since Sk's character is all messed up and cant do anything...

Manga-Otaku
09-21-2007, 09:23 PM
Yes I should be running to school or originally found out I am a diary holder. You find out. And test my abilities. There?

Excel-Kleinwald
09-21-2007, 09:38 PM
Yeah I meant MA's character... sorry.

the_kid
09-21-2007, 10:56 PM
who said my char was a gansta?I only meant to say every civilian should have a crowbar at least.An there is denials counts?

Excel-Kleinwald
09-21-2007, 11:15 PM
Yeah, we said this a while back, we instated a new rule of 4 denials of a dead end challenge per player. And I don't know anybody who has a crowbar... oh and your character has surpassed the human limit of running speed.

Manga-Otaku
09-21-2007, 11:21 PM
Yeah I noticed....

the_kid
09-21-2007, 11:26 PM
super human lol
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Zan watched the sky as he sat on the roof of his mansion/house."Another sad day, Lilly was talking in her sleep again"mumble Zan to himself.Zan checks his diary, 100 more death.Hmm more death, this diary never stops.Let me see the names of those suspected to be Diary Holders.There was this one who changed his fate, that's one is definetly a diary holder.This other one was a ruthless killer, maybe a diary holder too.Plus that dangerous girl at school who confess to me too.I think I got a glare.
Oh well I got plenty of girl confessing to me.None of them have true feeling all they think about are my speed.I want one that has real feel.."Zan watch his diary as a name suddenly shows up on his diary."Oh a another bother, well see if he is a diary holder"

Manga-Otaku
09-21-2007, 11:29 PM
Changing my name from Naomi to...Karin. Okay?
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Karin went around the corner from the alley way.
She hopped a fence.
"I should avoid the streets for a while then.."
She walked down the cobbled path.
Her footsteps echoed loud against the brick walls.
It was a dead end.
"Hmmmm..."
Karin climbed a garbage bin up to a pull ladder.
It belonged to the apartment building.
Karin pulled herself up and climbed the metal walk way.
"I seriously need to get home..."
She jumped off and landed on the other side of the wall.
Karin sighed.
She kept running past and soon came to a small complex.
Karin stopped in front of a small green house.
"Finally....Home."
Karin opened the door and walked inside.
She locked it and slouched into a sitting position.
Karin looked at the ceiling.
The door shook.
Someone knocked at the door.
"Now what?"
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Can someone at least give me a chance to join in here?

the_kid
09-21-2007, 11:31 PM
??wat do u mean?

Manga-Otaku
09-21-2007, 11:37 PM
I'm having trouble trying to get merged into your guy's story. You guys are moving so fast. >_<

the_kid
09-21-2007, 11:40 PM
the make a big article

Excel-Kleinwald
09-22-2007, 12:03 AM
PM Alberio to set something up, I believe they said they were willing for it...

And what is your native language the_kid?

Manga-Otaku
09-22-2007, 12:23 AM
Yeah the whole grammar thing eh?

the_kid
09-22-2007, 12:36 AM
mandarin why?I type fast so i get a lot of typos.

Excel-Kleinwald
09-22-2007, 12:51 AM
Well I was wondering because your sentences were just not really that grammatically correct and complete. Instead of typing fast, take your time and proofread your posts, it isn't a speed contest.

the_kid
09-22-2007, 12:52 AM
Well, at a young age I was train to type fast, so it's a habit.

Manga-Otaku
09-22-2007, 12:54 AM
Now how old are you?

the_kid
09-22-2007, 12:59 AM
15 years old

SilverKunai
09-22-2007, 01:19 AM
Hospitals suck. Nurses are alright, but generally suck. I still can't believe I can't do tennis or any other sport for 2 weeks. Damn fracture of the spine.

MangaAddict
09-22-2007, 01:50 AM
Wow, SK, that has nothing to do with this rp at all...
Ill edit this post with my part in a bit...
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Ephrem and Ayane watched as the police starting cleaning up after their investigation into the suicide.
“Do you have any family to stay with?” Ayane asked.
Ephrem was slow to respond, “No, my family… doesn’t know much about me. We aren’t close…”
“Where are you going to stay?”
Ephrem looked at the ground. “I don’t know.”
“You can stay at my house for a couple of nights. But just a couple! Don’t get comfy there or anything.” Ayane had to offer. It would seem rude not to help out the person who was willing to help her out.

“You can sleep on the couch. Here’s a blanket and pillow.” Ayane said while handing them over to Ephrem.
Ayane turned on the T.V. as Ephrem sat on the couch. One particular story was all over the news. A high school had been blown to pieces by some crazy man with explosives. Many people were hurt.
“Can you believe that?” Ayane said turning to Ephrem. He was starring at her. He quickly looked away.
“Yeah. That’s pretty scary.”
“I’m going to bed now. I’ll see you in the morning.” Ayane quickly went to her room.
She laid down on her bed and closed her eyes. Then she heard a noise. She forgot to lock the doors and windows! Ayane quickly sprang up.
At her bedroom window was the ninth. He smiled while placing an envelope on her window sill. Then he disappeared into the darkness.
Ayane's heart was beating rapidly. She didn’t realize she screamed until Ephrem ran into the room.
“What happened?!”
Ayane pointed at the letter. Ephrem walked over and took it. As he read it, his eyes got bigger and bigger.
“What does it say?” Ayane asked quietly.
Yukio Watanabe, the ninth, knew what Ephrem did. He knew that Ephrem killed his father…
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I'll be adding MO soon...

Excel-Kleinwald
09-22-2007, 04:08 AM
I wanna know how the heck he knows... :P

Oh and the_kid being trained to type fast or whatever should be combined with typing well, because in a normal occupation one is usually useless without the other.

the_kid
09-22-2007, 05:03 AM
not my fault, I was trained on this sucky program.He knows because his diary of fears, like how Ephherm(watever, I forgot sorry)is afraid of how Ayane will know or something.

SilverKunai
09-22-2007, 05:06 AM
.....So is anyone going to do a events to date on the story right now?

the_kid
09-22-2007, 05:07 AM
ya I was wondering about that.Basically my char is dawdling.No one posting?

Alberio
09-22-2007, 06:17 PM
Its Sk's turn, so I'm guessing he logged out soon after I did or he doesn't understand whats going on...

I still reccomend just looking back at the other topics, for a summary may be needed now but we're only on the third thread so MO and Rai you haven't missed as much as you might think.^^(most posts seem to be OOC anyway such as this one.))...

MangaAddict
09-22-2007, 06:29 PM
Sks turn and then Mos...
Alberio is right when he says not much has happened. This is only the third thread so if your really curious just go back and read the other posts.... or wait for someone with enough patience to write down what has happened so far...

Alberio
09-22-2007, 07:48 PM
I have the patience to write it, but I'd like to catch up in everything that has happened in the other series section, if I have a lot of free time after this and looking for .hack//GU vol. 3's FAQ to get Natsume I'll see how much pertinent info I can find.

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Alright...

So far we’ve had these events, I’ll describe them breifly

- Sylvia kills the 2nd and sees Zan.
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Everyone continues with their lives while thinking about their
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The next day Ephrem realizes Ayane is a diary holder and is going to die after school
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Ayane finds out she has a DEAD END and meets Ephrem and is told to meet him after class
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Ludis finds a strange riddle in his diary, while Sylvia makes a move on him but winds up shot down so she decides to force him to be her boyfriend

-Ayane confronts Ephrem, Saki receives two days off

-Zan faces his thoughts and the reality that anyone could be a diary holder. Ayane asks Ephrem how she will die after being told she will die.

- Sylvia attacks Zan and challenges him but he runs away, after being slashed at with a katana, and declines the challenge.

- Ephrem proves his future diary ability while he and Ayane head to his house as the fear diary holder takes Ayane away

- Ludis saw the 5th limping outside and hears of a bomb threat of the school as the boiler in the left wing lunch room explodes, Saki hears of this on the news and tries to find details with her diary with not much luck.

- Zan practices running at his house in their large backyard, a great place to train

- Ayane is tortured mentally by the fear diary user

- Ludis confronts the 5th and is threatened to have the entire school blown up, Sylvia is knocked unconscious during the time

- Ephrem finds Ayane’s position and gets ready to attack the 9th, while the 9th’s past is revealed to have his family killed by a serial killer as he becomes twisted in his childhood and tortured different things growing up

- Ayane and Ephrem manage to get away from the 9th before she was tortured physically, they didn’t kill him however, so he may come back to attack them

- Ludis fights the 5th still at a disadvantage and sees that he will be chooped up with an axe DEAD END

- A strange boy with white hair and red eyes brings Sylvia to his house and nurses her while she lays unconscious

- Ayane secures her home after returning to it and wakes up the next morning, questioning what to do next.

- Ludis is chased by the 5th and reaches a point to where he can almost only fight back, hanging on a ledge above the first floor, he might die if he did take his only other route appearing to him.

- Sylvia finds her diary gone after waking up and finds the boy, who had her diary as she thought, who told her he thought it could tell the future, she got ready to kill him immediately

- Ephrem approaches Ayane at schoolbut accidentally gives the wrong opinion to her friends so she pulls him out of the room and asks what he wants to hear him make a request for an alliance

- Zan attempts to make a plan to kill other diary holders, but to no avail while waking the street with a handgun always close to his hand in case of an attack
OOC- MO joins

-Ayane accepts Ephrem’s offer and quickly goes back to her friends continuing her normal school life
-Naomi comes to the school, classroom A-6, and is introduced to her class.

-Ludis manages to get away and sprays a fire hose to slow the 5th down and finds the axe he was going to be slain with

-Sylvia hears the boy out on why he wants to help her and allows him to live and be his meat shield against other diary holders, she brings him to her house, she pulls him to her bed and asks his name…he responds with Hoshi

-Ephrem watches Yukio’s assuming she was a diary holder.

-Saki meets with an old colleage at a café and they catch up on their happenings

-Zan notes Ludis as a candidate to be a diary holder and waits the explosions out…

-Ayane puts a bit of her trust in Ephrem asking when the 9th will attack again, he doesn’t think he’ll re-appear he tells her as a car drives up to the curb nearby

-Ludis manages to slice off his arm as they made a final strike against one another axe vs. machete, he came out the victor…

-Naomi ends up with a broken arm as two boys fought in her school, she leaves the school building.

-The next morning in Sylvia’s story she gives Hoshi her old boyfriend’s clothes, but scares him with telling him that what she did to him after he cheated on her wasn’t worth mentioning. They head to the library as Sylvia told him they would be going “hunting”

-Ephrem’s father hits on Ayane before the two get in the car, taunting Ephrem he is having his death/”suicide” already being planned for by Ephrem, in which happens later at home, he made his dad comftorable in their bath tub and waits for him to fall asleep in it while listening to their radio, Ephrem then puts a suicide note in the bathroom and pushes the radio in the tub…killing his father before he calls the police.

OOC- Rai joins

-Saro and Dues converse after he is carried by an elephant to him.

-Saki finishes her business with her old colleage and heads home.

-Saro is judged unworthy to win(correct?)

-Ludis finds out he chopped nearly the 5th’s left torso up, still alive, he had his heart thrusted into by Ludis who then thought he was losing his humanity in the ‘game’, he began to think of his sister afterward wondering why she left as he fell unconscious.

-Ayane found out about Ephrem’s dad after searching for him all day long, since she couldn’t find him, she went to his house after school, she had gotten his attention where he was crying, but it still seemed suspicious that such a person would commit suicide, she wondered if he had anything to do with it and asked if the 9th had anything to do with it, but he shook his head in response.

-Naomi received a message of a car and DEAD END appeared on her gameboy, but it then died out on her. She ran from her seat at the café she was in and soon after Dues sent her a message that the game had been starting, she then slumped down against the wall and thought of what to do.

-Sylvia finds out about the 5th and concludes it was a diary owner, she flipped a few pages in her diary, and rushed out the library with Hoshi. She remembered when she was ten she found a rotten corpse in a thrown out bag, that day she had wanted to live more than ever.

-Ephrem had gotten Ayane’s pity from saying he didn’t have anything to live for, and was told he still had her at least. She had regretted saying that but, his plan had been working out...perfectly even if their true feelings were different, she wanted his diary and he wanted her.

-Saki saves a middle schooler from thugs, but starts to nerve down after they leave and she takes care of him. After being thanked for bringing him home, she left to go to her apartment, where she had a massive migrane from all the sudden events popping up.

-Saro ponders on Deus’ words and tries to make clear of his own message in his diary, "I found someone laying on the ground... he is almost dead. Another diary holder?"

while wlking along the street.

-Zan goes over what he has seen and possible candidates for diary holders, a man’s name had appeared on his diary, he goes to check it out.

-Naomi(now named Karin) took an alternate route home, but after she got home someone knocked on her door.

-Ephrem is offered to stay at Ayane’s house after revealing he has no relatives to stay with, the two heard of the explosion incident at Ludis’ high school and both tried to fall asleep awhile after. Suddenly, Ayane heard rumble, then she remembered she forgot to lock up. The 9th, who was at her window, slipped a note under it she screa,ed after seeing him go back down. Ephrem ran in and read it before she could, she asked what had happened but Ephrem had found that the ninth knew he had killed his own father.
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There...Did I do alright?
Everyone understand who is who and what happened or shall I clear thinga up for you. Geez, earlier I said you guys said the ninth was the fifth lol this got my head on straight now that I had to use my brain again(school can't really get my mind going beyond a certain point without a hard test.)

Also, later Chez said that the boy brought his character to the hospital...o0

the_kid
09-22-2007, 07:50 PM
thank you alberio for not making my char a fool.

Alberio
09-22-2007, 08:27 PM
Did you edit your old posts? The later ones make more sense than they used to to me, but please stay on one track because at times yours is still a bit scattered.

Need I go on with the summary everyone before logging off?

Finished...

the_kid
09-22-2007, 08:30 PM
yes, you should.

chezkimo
09-22-2007, 10:19 PM
Yay, thanks Alberio. And you noted that the boy brings my character to the hospital. Why did you add a "0.o" to it? is it physically impossible or something? Very thorough by the way.

Whose turn is it? Manga-Otoku right?

Alberio
09-22-2007, 10:26 PM
I beleive its Sk's but I'm not certain.

I added that because in the first post your character seemed to be in his house but(due to either my lack of attention at the time or w/e) then she was jumped to the hospital in the second post.

Thank you, beleive me it took two hours(with other things done online) I'm pretty sure I got the most important points of peoples' post. :D Or I'll kick myself in the head if I didn't get the majority of them down...

SilverKunai
09-22-2007, 10:27 PM
So it seems its my turn..
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"Wake up... Its time to return, Ludis. Its time.." said an unknown voice. "You have won. You have the power to move on... So now, the question is. Will you do so? Will you put your life up and out to gain the power of becoming a god?"

And in that second, Ludis opened his eyes. He looked left and right to see himself inside a hospital. "I'm alive.." then his memories came rushing back to him: The events at school, the bombs, the 5th, the past.

"I...

have to win." and at that, he found his purpose to be in this [game].

Raijuu
09-22-2007, 11:21 PM
lol i was the one who took you there.... so now its MO's turn i beileve

the_kid
09-23-2007, 01:42 AM
Sk has finally took down his heartless looking avater.Anyway still waiting.

SilverKunai
09-23-2007, 01:46 AM
It didn't fit my expression at hand.

I didn't feel the complete urge to hurt or massacre. So I changed it.

Manga-Otaku
09-23-2007, 01:52 AM
Karin looked out her window.
She grabbed her book and sat down on a futon.
"What a long day, damn."
Karin's eyes drooped and she rolled over.
She fell asleep.

Later...

Karin rubbed her eyes and got up.
She glared at the beeping clock.
"Nooo! I'm late for school!"
She grabbed her books and stuffed them into her bag.
Karin ran out the door forgetting about the dead end.
She ran around the corner.
And up the road.
"How late am I????"
Karin ran straight onto the road.
Towards the school.

Raijuu
09-23-2007, 02:00 AM
which school was the one that blow up?

SilverKunai
09-23-2007, 02:01 AM
My character's school was blown up.

Raijuu
09-23-2007, 02:03 AM
so then,
<.<
>.>
You know... just wondering, I have no idea how old is my character (and that counts for all of the characters)

the_kid
09-23-2007, 02:28 AM
mine was 17 or 18 i think,Or was it 16?

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 03:25 AM
Next up is chez and then excel...
Oh and I edited the first post. So if you want to see all of the characters bios, thats where you can go instead of having to search for them in the sign up thread...

the_kid
09-23-2007, 04:13 AM
where MA?

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 04:13 AM
The first post of this thread...

the_kid
09-23-2007, 04:30 AM
oo i see.kk

Manga-Otaku
09-23-2007, 04:42 AM
MA when your next post is you have to summon the car okie?

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 04:42 AM
Yes, I will, I have a plan I believe...

SilverKunai
09-23-2007, 04:44 AM
Summoning a car?

Manga-Otaku
09-23-2007, 04:49 AM
Are you stupid? Yes summoning a car.

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 04:49 AM
Yes, Im going to summon a car. :rolleyes:

SilverKunai
09-23-2007, 04:50 AM
MA when your next post is you have to summon the car okie?

....

Type clearer.

the_kid
09-23-2007, 04:53 AM
with yugioh cards or something?

Manga-Otaku
09-23-2007, 04:56 AM
....................

Smirk..ROFL!

I mean get a car SK. And kid no..Pokemon cards!

SilverKunai
09-23-2007, 04:57 AM
Why didn't you just say so? We could've stopped from involving a unneeded conversation.

the_kid
09-23-2007, 04:57 AM
LOL!!!Man that was funny.But why do you want to die so much?

Manga-Otaku
09-23-2007, 05:04 AM
No I need a boost plus this will get me involved with the story. More I guess...I think I should meet some of your guy's characters...

SilverKunai
09-23-2007, 05:04 AM
I'm still not comfortable for the_kid to use 'Zan' as his character's name.

Manga-Otaku
09-23-2007, 05:11 AM
Awww....Soul Society? I miss it...Ikimaru Zan.

the_kid
09-23-2007, 05:14 AM
Why can't I use Zan?This is America freedom,FREEDOM!!!!!

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 05:15 AM
Of course, you have to be an American...

the_kid
09-23-2007, 05:16 AM
?What,what?I don't get that.

Alberio
09-23-2007, 11:43 AM
She means that some people don't live in America(I really hate me calling The States that:skull:), so just because you live there doesn't mean everyone has the same set of rules and laws you do. Things are different in other places as you know, but in some places freedom of just about any kind doesn't have to exist.

On a side note, they never said you can't, just that it makes them uncomforable to see it, and I'm inferring that would be from it being used in another rp.

chezkimo
09-23-2007, 01:13 PM
Sorry....Skip my turn please. Excel you may go now.

Sorry i didn't tell you earlier. You may yell at me now...

Excel-Kleinwald
09-23-2007, 01:50 PM
I won't yell at you... I'll just edit this post...

oh and there is no such thing as freedom on the internet, you have to follow the rules of the site OR ELSE.
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Ephrem sat there in a daze for a few seconds as Ayane got closer to read the note and his brain was on overtime right now; thinking, calculating, judging, just frying itself out. And then he came up with a great plan. Ephrem ground his teeth together and yelled in frustration as he ripped the note into teeny tiny pieces.

"What did you do that for?! What did it say?"

"Th-th-the ninth... he he... he was the one..."

"The one what? I don't understand Ephrem."

"He... he tortured my father! That damn b*st*rd tortured my father to the point of suicide! It was all in that no- oh no... I'm sorry Ayane... I am sorry, I was just mad."

Simply horrified at what the ninth was capable of she started to be a little afraid herself. "D-don't worry Ephrem... we'll get him, we will get him."

Ephrem slumped his shoulders and picked up the scraps of paper and produced a tear or two for dramatic effect. He walked out in silence, placed the paper into his pockets and lay down on the couch once more with another malicious smile on his face.

If I can keep things working in my favor, I am capable of anything! Now to see what the ninth is doing...

Ephrem was thinking as he pulled out his journal...

Alberio
09-23-2007, 01:53 PM
No need for yelling, not much would've happened anyway. EK take your time please, I won't differ from what I mean so...I take time to get my post the way I want so yeah. >_>
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By time for morning things could’ve gone better for Saki, her migrane was merely a headache from stress and when she woke up the new paperboy for her apartment lacked the common sense to just leave it at the door, lucky for her the telemarketers were not calling early today. She had finally gotten a chance to relax as she lighted her cigarette, turn on the TV, and lie (grammatically correct?) down.

Not much on the news really mattered to her, she heard of a suicide in an area not far from her apartment complex. Even though this game didn’t mean much to her, she knew that eventually she would have to do something aside from watch her back. No signs of an attack aimed at her by another diary user seemed to appear to her since she was challenged by the ninth, who was the only other holder aware of her position but not her actual identity. Even if he did come again, she would taser him until his heart stopped beating, of course that would mean her having it with her which was her primary concern the second was even surviving an initiative attack.

Still, she decided to search for another user later, right now she would just continue her home projects and search the internet on her laptop for any helpful information she could find, she had been specifing on finding some record or mention of Deus or using an item to tell the future that seemed realistic or similar to her own.
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Well my long intro is done so I'm finally going to have her move, and yes I said the ninth since he seems to be the most active. It would be fun to have Saki make an alliance with him.

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 07:23 PM
Since the kid hasnt been on for a while and his story does not affect mine, can I just go?

Alberio
09-23-2007, 07:40 PM
Sorry, you gotta wait on Rai still I think. He was on not too long ago, I'd say two hours.

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 07:43 PM
Oh man, I forgot all about raijuu... sorry emo kid!

the_kid
09-23-2007, 08:39 PM
so who's turn is it?

MangaAddict
09-23-2007, 09:20 PM
The kids or Raijuus turn...

the_kid
09-23-2007, 09:26 PM
rai since he's 11th

Excel-Kleinwald
09-24-2007, 12:18 AM
ok people, stop asking whose turn it is, and just look at the numbered order at the first page :P

the_kid
09-24-2007, 12:45 AM
if he is not on by tonight and i got to sleep and then he post tommorow then you guys will have to like wait for me until 3 pacific.Just you know yeah.

MangaAddict
09-24-2007, 12:54 AM
Why dont you just go for just this once. Your guys storylines dont affect each other yet and I would hate having to wait that long...

the_kid
09-24-2007, 01:06 AM
okay I'll edit this post
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Zan watches the diary intently as the messages scribbles onto the pages.The name of this person and what he will do.He will soon have a dead end.(Just so you know not mine.) "Eh whatever", said Zan "It's another trash, all he does was pull out his cellphone at night multiple time."Zan stood up and went down to Earth.Zan packed up and went to gun shooting lessons.Bam!Zan shot a direct hit.

Instructor:Nice. Do you do this everyday?

Zan: If I do this everyday won't I be a killer?And no I'm not

As the instructor walks away Zan smirk at him.Lifting his gun for a head shot Zan said "Bam ,Jack pot."
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there we go.

Raijuu
09-24-2007, 09:00 PM
Sorry about the wait guys.... ill go now if i may...
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Saro sat at his desk waiting for school to end.
"I winder if I should have killed that guy... instead of taking him to hospital. After all he IS a diary holder as well"
The bell sounded and he got out of class walking slowly and thoughtful.
"..... It kind of makes sense now." He took out his phone and went back a few pages. "Thats why Deus told me I wasnt the one after all.... Its because I dont want to kill anyone, but for this game I have to. So, if I decide not to do it, then that means its game over for me."
He walked into the park and sat down.
".... Why does people have to kill others?.... Well, thats not my way, I wont kill anyone even if it is destroying the dairy, I wont do it."
He got up and walked towards his house.
"People doesnt have a right to take others lifes and thats final"
Almost crying but with anger he walked away.
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well, there you go......

Excel-Kleinwald
09-24-2007, 09:03 PM
And this is MA's post...
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Ayane went about her usual morning routine taking about an hour to get ready. Ephrem sighed the entire time.
As they were about to leave the house, Ephrem grabbed Ayane.
“I looked at my diary last night. He has cameras in the house. He must have them in mine too. He’s outside right now, waiting for us,” he said quietly.
Ayane nodded and walked out. Just as Ephrem said, the ninth was waiting for them parked in a car across the street.
Ayane went over to the garage and opened the door. She walked inside and took a set of keys off a hook.
“You have a license?” Ephrem asked.
“No.”
They got into the car and Ayane backed out. She turned in the opposite direction of the ninth. He started following them. He was mere inches from their car.
“What’s he trying to do?” Ayane asked incredulously as she started speeding up. The ninth did the same.
Ephrem wrote “Ayane Ashiya” in his diary.
“Turn left.”
Ayane turned. The ninth followed.
“There’s a light up ahead. Just go through it!”
The ninth was getting closer. This time he rammed their car. Ayane sped up.
“Watch out! There’s a girl up ahead!”
Ayane swerved just in time. She saw the girl’s terrified face and she beeped her horn. The girl ran to the sidewalk just moments before the ninth could have hit her.
“Okay, there’s a stop sign next. Don’t stop.”
Ayane ran the stop sign as a car came through the intersection. It hit its brakes and the ninth’s car slammed into it.
“We did it!” Ayane started laughing from relief as she pulled into the school parking lot.

the_kid
09-24-2007, 10:30 PM
just got back from school and later dentist appointment so...ya

the_kid
09-25-2007, 10:58 PM
no one posting?

MangaAddict
09-25-2007, 10:59 PM
Its SilverKunais turn and he just logged off...

SilverKunai
09-26-2007, 12:40 AM
...If I didn't log off, I would've been nice.

My pain pills make me act differently.
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Somewhere in Deus's Dimension

"Interesting boy.. He changed the whole entire future of his fate from one little choice. This... " the giant god grinned. "will be very interesting."
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Ludis looked out the window once more and to his 'luck', a nurse came in. "Ah... You're up."

"Thank you... but, where am I?" Ludis responded.

"This, is Ethereal Heart. A hospital. You were found lying on the grounds of the school, losing so much very blood-"

And so, the nurse explained all the events to his arrival. She seemed nice. She was about as tall as Ludis and didn't look much older than him at all. She looked around D cup and had a friendly smile, her hair was amber.

"Anyway, my name is Rikashu, Ludis-san." she said with a sincere smile.

"Nice to meet you." Ludis responded.

MangaAddict
09-26-2007, 01:53 AM
MO are you going to go now or are you going to go tomorrow?

Manga-Otaku
09-26-2007, 02:57 AM
Karin stepped back and fell over.
"Ah...Ah...That was close.."
She pulled out her gameboy.
The screen flickered again.
A few more times then "DEAD END" disappeared.
Karin sighed.
"Then that means...That girl."
Karin got up.
"Dam! I'm still late for school!"
Karin got up and sprinted towards the school.
She ran down the hall and skidded by the door.
Karin swung open the door.
"Gomen a sai! (I'm sorry!)"
The teacher looked at her funny.
All the classmates did as well.
"Umm...Um.."
The teacher poked his glasses.
"Well Karin-san you've been moved."
Karin glanced at the teacher.
Her face turned red in embarrassment.
"The which class am I in??"
The teacher poked his glasses once again.
"This is A-5. You're in C-5."
Karin backed up.
"Gather your supplies. An escort will come to pick you up."
Karin walked to her desk and sat down.
She could her some girls in the back gossiping.
Some guys were whispering.
"I heard she disappears because she is crazy...And kills people."
"No. I heard she got moved because of the teachers tired of her.
Karin's face saddened.
"Alls well ends well."
She started to pack her things.

Excel-Kleinwald
09-26-2007, 10:12 AM
Dammit SK, if you're going to delete his posts, at least tell him about it so he doesn't post wondering where his posts are going, resulting in more post deletion. the_kid SK deleted your posts because eh felt they were spam and a waste of RP space

chezkimo
09-26-2007, 04:34 PM
my turn! man you guys stay up late! True dedicated people, yup. anyway...

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It had been one week ago that Slyvia went to that library and saw what made her remember her past.

"Um, what are we doing here, Slyvia?" Hoshi said incredibly puzzled.
"Be quiet meat-shield-chan. You're here escorting a lady that's all you need to know"

They were stood outside a rather "official" looking building. It had gotten cold as winter was nearing so Sylvia was in a long black coat and black boots. Hoshi on the other hand was less dressed as it was a cloudy day and so there was not much sun shine. He wore a light white jacket and jeans.

"Well, lets go in! This is where we're going to work now!"
"What?!" Hoshi replied even more puzzled
"Stupid shield-chan. While you went back home for a week i got us internship here. We're working here from now on!" She grinned "I wanted to work here and ofcourse as my personal body gaurd you have to accompany me!"

Even though Sylvia had never even been in the building the area in which it was in was definatly one she had seen before. Because not far away is where Sylvia found that corpse.

*I guess this place was the only one in the area that had any free work places*

They went in...

"Ah, so you two are the two new inters that will be working with us for the next couple weeks huh. You'll just be mainly doing secreterial work. The person who'll be supervising you is very good, you should go and meet her now".

Sylvia and Hoshi walked into the next room. "Pleased to meet you. I am Sylvia, Sylvia Gin Okoyama. Take good care of me (common japanese phrase)" Her voice as usual was clam with a slight under-mocking tone "and you are...?"

"Saki Shibayama"

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Alberio, i hope this is ok? I kinda noticed that you hadn't had any physical contact with the other of us diary holders so, coincidences happen...

Alberio
09-26-2007, 08:01 PM
Not a problem, but if you're working in the same building as her your character would have to have programming skills or just be a tester for the video games they work on.^^ I was thinking of her allying with the ninth lol still might. Your character is from a wealthy family(or semi wealthy family), correct?

As per them being dedicated, yes sirie, but just remember timezones. hahaha

Just to warn you I may not be on until tommorow so I might just want to edit this now...

Excel-Kleinwald
09-26-2007, 10:27 PM
Ayane and Ephrem walked into the school not realizing what they were doing was big news. All over the school rumors were flying about them, they came to school together, Ayane and Ephrem were riding in the same car, were they going out? What was going on! Well... it was big news for their high school, and it just seemed trivial now considering what had just happened. Ayane quickly regained her composure, just brushing it off as giving charity to the needy. His father had just died so it was the LEAST she could do to help him, and she was making it out as if Ephrem owed her BIG now. It was about midday when Ephrem was getting tired of it all and decided to fight back now. He walked right up to Ayane and her group of giggly friends.

"Thank you again Ayane-san, you are very helpful"

"Oh it's no problem, for me anyway." She flaunted her snobbish conceited voice proudly.

"Yeah, and thanks for last night too, I mean I don't know who would do that for me... you know letting me sleep at your place and all." He bowed and as his face lowered out of view he gave a quick smirk only she could see and then quickly left to let the rumors fly out at her and she tried to calm them down as best as she could. He made his way to the roof as he didn't plan to spend any time in class because of how "emotionally scarred" he was going to skip. He decided to call a flower shop and send some anonymously to Ayane.

During the next break in between classes a delivery man brought a bouquet, a card, and a box. She couldn't believe what she had just received. When she opened the card she read it quickly.

I heard you're planning to go to college soon, well I wanted to help you get there. If you study the English well, you can learn a lot about Yale. In the box is some information regarding Yale and the scholarships given that you qualify for. Now you should only open the box if you don't mind being bugged.

After reading it she soon became puzzled, and she wondered why some words were bolded, and when she looked down at the signature, there was a simple number nine. She gasped as she realized what the card was talking about. Little did Ephrem know that his flower delivery had been ambushed, the ninth wasn't hurt in the accident, and that he was about to be revealed...

SilverKunai
09-27-2007, 12:21 AM
This has been the longest of times since I have RPed that my character hasn't joined with another character.

This is much easier.

MangaAddict
09-27-2007, 12:22 AM
Good for you. Alberio is next. So now we wait.

Raijuu
09-27-2007, 12:28 AM
and then its me right?.....

Sk@ everybody is an enemy....

SilverKunai
09-27-2007, 12:29 AM
As in interaction.

Alberio
09-27-2007, 02:47 AM
I'll edit this tommorow since me and chez will be the people focused on this post the most.

I kinda agree with what Sk said in an rp such as this, but it winds up as more of a lone story without interaction so whenever you want you would interact in this. Its like a Gantz rp lol Its more Izumi style though.

I re-read your post, lol she’ll just be doing a secretary’s job.
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The next day Saki had been getting ready for the meeting later, and she had spruced up her routine a little. Still, when she took a look through her diary it had presented something about having to be a advisor for a someone from a wealthy family or something similar to that. She had felt a headache coming in the future(figure of speech), so she brought some Advil with her.

When she got to the company building, people were working as if it were a normal day. She had done the same for two hours, but then was summoned for the meeting from her office. She felt slightly anxious to see what new project or improvement in the company the higher-ups had planned, but she had listened in and voiced her opinion several times on the topic, they were going to get the newest software available for the jobs. Whenever this had happened within the company, things had always taken a sudden jog in production since many slack off or just can’t work for a few days, but judging from her getting early days off she was going to be needed during those times. ‘Great, crunch time is always a pain in the neck but this has happened several times, things were fine as is…’

She had gotten back to work, but was called down to meet someone at the lobby, but they had already entered the waiting room mostly used for those who want to see relatives, which was a room she hadn’t used in quite some time, her parents had been in a nursery home so she was the one visiting them. It had been two teens in front of her, a frail looking boy with quite the “unique” appearance about him, and a girl with long black hair and pale skin. She had introduced herself as Sylvia, but ignored her tone and would like the boy to introduce himself as well.

She had responded with her name as well after being asked, her voice had sounded pretty fine compared to normal from her habit of smoking, which she has had many tell her to quit doing. She looked to the boy to hear his name, but he had been looking about the building as if he had never seen such a place, she shook her head.

“Young man, you would be…?”, she asked to get his attention yet to her saying it was a bit aggressive of her.

Raijuu
09-28-2007, 01:41 AM
opps.... sorry about that... didnt see it...
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Saro layed in bed while still thinking

"heh... well, Ill definitely wont make this easy for the other diary holders.... I may not be able to fight at night but thats my only weakness" (since my diary only works during the day and predicts everything its going to happen at night... although because the other diary holders can change that to dead end and if it happens at night I cant predict it... thats the weakness)

"anyway, so then at night I should stay in bed and try not to get killed by any means, and during the day Ill just see whats going to happen... its as simple as that."

He went back on being serious.
"I will still keep my promise... I will never take away anyone's life, but I wont let them take mine either... at least, not that easy"

He kept quiet and began to look at the sky through his window.
".... at least, there is nice weather today...."

the_kid
09-28-2007, 03:36 PM
is it my turn?sry my internet was down for like 2 days.
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Zan as usual in his spare time runs around the house,thinking of what he needs to do next."I got alot of thing on my mind Deus.Stop with the destiny crap.There is only one winner.It's me!" Zan said to himself.Zoommmm.click.Zan stop the stop watch.Zan breathed in and out as he suck in more air.Zan look up the watch and saw his time:4 seconds.4 seconds in a 100 meter dash."Heh, this nothing, absolute nothing."

SilverKunai
09-28-2007, 07:05 PM
....

Why must you simple minded people all make god-powered characters?

Raijuu
09-28-2007, 07:36 PM
eh..... for starters my character is the weakest of them all.... if you mean me...

Alberio
09-28-2007, 07:43 PM
God-powered?*(generally its called God modding...) I guess I'll need to read the kid's post because a lot of us have normal people as our rpc. The majority of us put a weakness on our diarys' too.

MangaAddict
09-28-2007, 08:01 PM
“Who are they from?” one of Ayane’s friends asked.
Ayane looked at the flowers and the box she was holding.
“Oh, just one of those confessors again… when will they learn?” She said with a convincing grin. The others laughed as they walked to class.
Ayane shoved the flowers and the box into her locker; she would deal with them later. She quickly ran to class before the bell rang. Soon the teacher started talking and Ayane's mind wandered. She was having an awful day thanks to Ephrem Yale!
Yale… one of the bolded words on the note from the ninth was Yale. Did that mean that the thing in the box had something to do with Ephrem? But ‘bugged’ was also bolded…
A girl walked into the classroom, apparently she was new. She sat down next to Ayane. Ayane noticed the girl starring at her frequently throughout class.
“Do you have a problem?” Ayane asked irritably.
“Uh, no, it’s just that you almost ran over me this morning.”
“Oh, that was you. Sorry. I was only following my friend’s directions.” Ayane replied.
“Someone gave you directions? The boy who was with you? What’s his name?”
Why was this girl so curious? It irritated Ayane. Then she thought about it. This girl was new and she seemed a little too interested in her. Maybe she worked for the ninth? Or maybe she was a diary holder who had also tracked her down? Maybe she was over exaggerating?
“His name is Gin Toya.” Ayane lied. Gin was a popular athlete and student. If this girl approached him it would be all over the school and then Ayane would have the grounds to be suspicious. The girl was silent for the rest of the class.

The last bell rang as Ayane went to her locker and pulled out her homework, flowers, and the box. She threw the flowers into the nearest trash and went into a deserted hallway.
She sat the box down on a bench and took out her keys to rip the tape. She opened the box…

the_kid
09-28-2007, 08:31 PM
god power?i don't have god power....

Excel-Kleinwald
09-29-2007, 12:59 PM
Yes you do, your character runs a 100 meter dash in 4.4 seconds, that is what we would call too powerful/god-moding.

chezkimo
09-29-2007, 01:14 PM
hmmmmmmmm, yeah, that is kinda semi-god moding. 4.4 seconds in 100 meters, wow, if i did they it'd probably follow with a heart attack later! lol...i'm lazy and don't excercise.

In any case, if anybody thinks that i'm god-moding here's reasons why. Sylvia is a crazy b*tch k so she's gonna have wepons with her. Being that she belongs in a semi-wealthy family she can aquire a sword these days, as well as a ladder.

secondly, even though i don't mention it her diary has a great potential weakness - it's manga. therefor she can only see pictures, actions and what people say. Therefor it is not as descriptive as the other diaries. However, if you have noticed in my rp posts, my character has never said anything/done anything that implies that it is descriptive, she bases what she finds out only on what she sees and what she presumes.
(yes, i type alot...)

Excel-Kleinwald
09-29-2007, 01:17 PM
Um... right... well the only problem we were having here was with the_kid.

chezkimo
09-29-2007, 01:22 PM
oooooooooooh, ok. I thought you were refering to bout half the RPers in general. After all you did (or someone) said that "why do all you people create god characters. In any case, we should stop all the OOC posts, fills too much up!

MangaAddict
09-29-2007, 08:18 PM
Its Sks turn but didnt he say he was gonna be gone or something?

the_kid
09-29-2007, 08:59 PM
it's possible someone can run in 4 second for 100 meter dash.I mean seriously it's possible.Anyway still waiting for the nex person.

Raijuu
09-29-2007, 09:03 PM
4 seconds? lol dude, you know how long 100 meters are?.... I mean 1 meter is like 3 almost 4 feet... and 100 of those is a lot...

Manga-Otaku
09-29-2007, 09:04 PM
The fastest in the world is like 10 seconds or something..NOT 4!

Excel-Kleinwald
09-29-2007, 09:11 PM
it's possible someone can run in 4 second for 100 meter dash.I mean seriously it's possible.Anyway still waiting for the nex person.

NO IT IS NOT POSSIBLE to run that fast. The fastest man in the world can run maybe 9.8 seconds for 100 meters. A meter is about the same length as a yard, so think of it like you're running an American Football field in four seconds, that is becoming INHUMAN. For the most part this RP is supposed to be realistic.

And don't worry too much about OOC posts, I mean it isn't as if we're trying to make a minimum or anything right? And even so we COULD make an OOC thread just in case, alright Chez?

SilverKunai
09-29-2007, 11:33 PM
...I'm guessing its my turn..

Alberio
09-30-2007, 12:18 AM
MA just posted so yep.

MangaAddict
09-30-2007, 04:24 AM
Its still Kunais turn... and after him its MO.
And if no one saw, Alberio edited his post two pages ago.
I also think we should make a discussion thread so that we can see when someone edits their post instead of completely going off topic like we so often do...

SilverKunai
09-30-2007, 11:28 PM
This is my post... after so long..

Yea... I don't give a damn about the length, since I've been away.
_____________________

"Nice to meet you, Rikashu-san." Ludis smiled.

"Well, you are in stable condition and you're awake after being in a semi-coma for 5 days. We'll still need to do some tests, but you'll be leaving in a week." She gave a smile back and then quickly after, she got paged to another patient. "I'll be back." she said as she walked out.

Ludis watched her leave and as soon as she got out, his smile faded. "Its about time I leave this hell hole. I can't stay here for another week." Ludis looked around and found new clothes in the bathroom. It was a pair of jeans and a short sleeved hoodie.

"Its about time I left.." he took the bed sheets and began to use the classic "rope out".

After 10 minutes, he was done and he threw the sheets down. He tied the first end to a bed with a fat, sleeping patient resting on. He cut the part near the window a few inches and started his task. He climbed down with ease and gave the sheet a upward tug, which allowed the breaking sheets to well, cut off.

He was out of there with hardly a trace.

I'm coming for you next, 6th...

Whomever you are.

Manga-Otaku
09-30-2007, 11:41 PM
Karin walked out of class.
"Hmm...So that answers part of it."
Karin grabbed her bag and headed down the hallway.
"That person must be a diary holder.."
She bumped into a guy.
"Sorry."
He turned around and headed the other way.
Karin sighed.
"It's the only way.."
She walked out of the school and towards the park.
Karin played her gameboy after sitting down on the bench.
The evening sun started to disappear.
The moon slowly crept up the dark sky.
Karin looked up.
"Better head home.."
She got up and walked down the streets.
The night lamps turned on flickering.
Karin approached her home with a sigh.
A boy was on her step.
It was one of her classmates.
"Umm.."
The student looked up.
"Oh! Watanabe-san..."
Karins face turned red.
"What could he be doing here?"
"Umm...Atarashi-san..What is it?"
He stood up.
"I wanted to ask if you wanted to go to dinner tomorrow?"
Karin froze.
"Umm...okay! What time?"
"7:00? Is good,"
Karin nodded.
Atarashi took off with a smile.
Karin sighed.
"Middle school I've known him..But when did he come here?"

SilverKunai
09-30-2007, 11:45 PM
Well, the battlefield has been set..

MangaAddict
10-01-2007, 12:25 AM
Oo, your going after MOs character?
Now its Chezs turn and then Excel... just in case no one knows...

SilverKunai
10-01-2007, 01:38 AM
Then Alberio..

It seems they're never on when I am.

MangaAddict
10-02-2007, 01:33 AM
Where the hell is chez?

the_kid
10-02-2007, 05:58 AM
he got collage so..

chezkimo
10-02-2007, 08:36 PM
Dudes! Yeah, i got college!! and an assighment! skip me, by thursday onwards i'll be able to post.

MangaAddict
10-02-2007, 09:04 PM
Excel, Alberio, then raijuu... we really need a discussion thread or something...

Alberio
10-02-2007, 09:07 PM
Skip me, I have a few things to do and I don't think I should make a move without being able to check the actions out with Chez.

MangaAddict
10-02-2007, 09:26 PM
Excel, Raijuu, and then the Kid... all of them are offline though, lol!

the_kid
10-02-2007, 11:27 PM
i am online until 8 am pacific then all the way until 3:00 i am offline.

MangaAddict
10-03-2007, 12:26 AM
You guys better have some serious writers block or Im kicking your asses...

SilverKunai
10-03-2007, 12:57 AM
Have you even interacted with any other character yet?

MangaAddict
10-03-2007, 12:59 AM
If your asking me, then yes. Excels character is obsessed with mine and my character almost killed MOs.

SilverKunai
10-03-2007, 01:03 AM
My character is finishing the job..

MangaAddict
10-03-2007, 01:07 AM
Is it strange that I found that humorous... nah...

SilverKunai
10-03-2007, 01:09 AM
You planning ever to change that avatar to something actually feminine?

MangaAddict
10-03-2007, 01:11 AM
... where the hell did that come from?
Excel better post something tomorrow or allow rai to skip him... Im getting bored waiting!

SilverKunai
10-03-2007, 01:15 AM
Its simply that you could've gotten a clown that actually have good teeth?

Try the government instead of the clowns on the street. Those other clowns actually have a decent earning.

Excel probably got hit by a train...

Excel-Kleinwald
10-03-2007, 10:52 PM
Ephrem felt a chill as he sat there thinking on the roof and got the sudden urge to look at his diary, and he wrote Ayane's name into it. He read as the events happened in the school courtyard...

Ayane opened the box and bugs flew out all over the place leaving her shrieking at the top of her lungs and she soon recovered from hyperventilating as the bugs disappeared. She looked down at the dropped portable DVD player. She pressed play as she sat back down and watched as edited video clips scrolled through the screen. She watched as Ephrem wrote something down in his house... made a bath for his father, entered into the bathroom while his father was asleep in the tub... and then as Ephrem dropped a stereo into the tub. Then the video stopped and zoomed in closer to view Ephrem's malevolently smiling face. Ayane couldn't believe what she had just seen and couldn't believe Ephrem at the same time now.

Raijuu
10-03-2007, 11:21 PM
Saro walked to the hospital's hallways to the room where he left the injured diary holder to see some people walking back and forth impatient. He got close to a nurse.

"err excuse me... but can you tell me whats going on here?" He asked her
"I know you, you were the one who brought the injured kid who was in this room right?"
"y-yeah... but what do you mean he 'was' here?"
"It looks like he ran off after waking up.... but its troublesome" She show him some papers that Saro couldnt really understand but he took a look at it. "It seems his body is not fully healed yet so he needs more rest, this will make his conditions even worse for him if he keeps pushing himself too far."
".... I see, so do you have any ideas where he might be?"
"None. We are looking right now but it seems nothing has come up yet. Although Im pretty sure this kid is not normal... I mean he got out of the hospital without anyone even noticing it."
"I see..." He gave back the papers to the nurse ".... well, he IS a diary holder after all.... even though he is nothing like me, Im sure, we have things in commun and I dont want him to die just yet" "Ill look for him as well." Saro said to the nurse and left running. "I dont know where you are but I will find you."

the_kid
10-03-2007, 11:40 PM
"Zan twirls his pencil as he yawns in class."Sniff,Sniff, I think I got a cold." Zan then looks around, turning his head 90 degree."Funny how some people are absent for like days.""Sylvia Gin Okayama!" the teacher yell out."Huh that girl," said Zan to himself."A total _____, if you ask me."Hiding under his desk was a newspaper."Recently", on the newspaper it says "A nearby school was bombed down, no survivor was found."Zan then look at the date "Damn this news is old."Tap Tap. "Zan Kudou", said the teacher.

MangaAddict
10-04-2007, 12:53 AM
Ayane stood up. She was shocked. She couldn’t believe what she just saw. It was impossible. She thought she could trust Ephrem but he cold-heartedly killed his own father!
Ayane thought quickly. She took the DVD player and threw it into her bag, ignoring the bugs that had still lingered on its surface.
She grabbed the rest of her books and ran out the back entrance. Ephrem would most likely be at the car waiting for her. She took off in the opposite direction. She needed to think. Could she go back to her house? Should she call the police? She had evidence proving what Ephrem really was. But he had also saved her life and she was still indebted to him. Was he planning on killing her so that he could become a god?
Ayane ran into a park and sat down on a bench. She dropped her books and thought. She couldn’t come up with any solutions.
A shadow appeared before her and Ayane looked up. Ephrem stood in front of her.
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dun dun dun...

Raijuu
10-04-2007, 07:48 PM
........ so she is dead...... Sk is next right?

Excel-Kleinwald
10-04-2007, 07:51 PM
Instead of answering that question, I will say this once again... DON'T ASK IT GOES IN ORDER OF DIARY HOLDER NUMBERS!!! LOOK AT THE FIRST PAGE IF YOU DON'T REMEMBER!!!

Raijuu
10-04-2007, 07:53 PM
.....

well well, someone is in a bad mood today.... I mean, I HAVE already said like a million times that Im way too lazy to do stuff when I really dont have to (because I know Im not next)

Excel-Kleinwald
10-04-2007, 08:12 PM
That makes it even worse... next time somebody asks that something bad is happening.

the_kid
10-05-2007, 02:28 AM
just a question how "far" can this story go.You know what I mean.:ninja:

Excel-Kleinwald
10-05-2007, 09:44 AM
It can go until there is one winner obviously.

SilverKunai
10-05-2007, 09:03 PM
...

I'll make my post...
_____________________

Ludis sighed. Even though I said I would hunt the 6th down, I do not know where he/she is... I should have my next future entry in a while...

Then his cell phone rang. His sleepy attitude was wakened and he answered it.

"Hello?"

Then, it happened. " 7 days..." A raspy voice said.

Ludis took the phone off his ear. Then he looked at his phone. He was silent for a while, then he found the words he wanted to say.

the_kid
10-05-2007, 10:53 PM
It can go until there is one winner obviously. i don't mean that i meant the other way.

Excel-Kleinwald
10-05-2007, 11:17 PM
I... still don't know what you mean then...

Raijuu
10-05-2007, 11:40 PM
just a question how "far" can this story go.You know what I mean.:ninja:

far.... until someone gets bored and decides to get himself killed.... or someone else kills him.....

the_kid
10-05-2007, 11:50 PM
rai do you evern read my posts?

Excel-Kleinwald
10-05-2007, 11:56 PM
Still want to know what exactly you mean the_kid

the_kid
10-06-2007, 01:26 AM
like the genre.

SilverKunai
10-06-2007, 01:35 AM
What the hell does that have to do with how 'far' it goes?

the_kid
10-06-2007, 01:42 AM
how far like high you know

:xxx
:seinen
:shounen
:shoujo
:kids

SilverKunai
10-06-2007, 01:45 AM
Why are you asking the posters who aren't planning any sexual intercourse?

the_kid
10-06-2007, 01:46 AM
Wait a minute.So SK you are planning a xxx????

Excel-Kleinwald
10-06-2007, 01:48 AM
It won't go that far for two reasons

1) The manga doesn't
2) The board doesn't allow it

SilverKunai
10-06-2007, 01:50 AM
Are you just being a [dumb] for laughs?

Its not funny.

I'll put this simple.

I am not going to put in a god damn sex scene.

the_kid
10-06-2007, 01:52 AM
I hope so.Okay I have no more questions.

Raijuu
10-06-2007, 03:14 AM
lol... I still think that was a stupid way to make that question "how far it goes?"

Manga-Otaku
10-06-2007, 04:15 AM
Karin looked at the board.
"Tomorrow is a day off..."
She walked down the hall.
Atarashi bumped into her.
"Remember seven~"
He danced off.
Karin cursed.
"Why is he so damed happy?!!?!"
She entered her class.
Karin thought of the girl from yesterday.
"Ayane?"
Karin looked around.
"Is she here today?"
She looked around.
Talking girls..
Boring guys..
Normal teacher..
Nerdy kids..
"Where could she be?"
Karin finished her page and stood up.
A bell went off.
Karin reached into her bag.
Nothing.
Flashback...
Karin running out the door.
Leaving her lunch.
She sighed.
"Again.."
A bento was smacked onto her desk.
It was Atarashi.
He was grinning.
Karin looked at the bento then at him.
"Why the hell are you so dam happy?"
She glared.
Atarashi laughed.
"Your still the same as always.."

SilverKunai
10-06-2007, 06:54 PM
Skip Chez...

Alberio
10-06-2007, 06:57 PM
Depends, I think he meant Thursday as in the one we just had so he should be on sooner or later.

SilverKunai
10-06-2007, 07:07 PM
So you just so happened to post and then log off for that?

Raijuu
10-06-2007, 07:09 PM
maybe its trying to copy me by using the invisible state or it just log off.... thats right, it is an it

Excel-Kleinwald
10-06-2007, 09:37 PM
We can see the invisible people... but yeah, maybe we shouldn't skip chez just yet?

Manga-Otaku
10-06-2007, 10:16 PM
Yeah Chez hasn't been posting in the Claymore one either so go ahead.

the_kid
10-06-2007, 10:38 PM
I think..Chez is long dead and the 1 posting is a imposter.

MangaAddict
10-06-2007, 11:30 PM
Chez was last on 3 days ago... so I say we should skip him again. I think he said he wouldnt be back on until Thursday anyway...

Excel-Kleinwald
10-06-2007, 11:57 PM
"I guess you know now, huh?" Ephrem called to her calmly.

"Get away from me! You're a killer! You killed your father an-and even staged it as a suicide!" Ayane screamed at him edging away from him as he walked closer to her.

'I had to do it... he was a nuisance, he didn't even care about me! I would never live up to his greatness so all he did was let me live! He was a monster, you'd do the same thing! I had to make my own money, buy my own food... my house barely has any utilities because I pay for them all!" He tried to plead to her but the murder seemed to be the only thing on her mind right now.

"That is no excuse to take his life! Please, please stay away..."

"I'd never hurt you Ayane, please realize this..." he got down into the seiza position and lowered his forehead to the ground "I am sorry that I have scared you like this... I would never hurt you... I was just getting revenge on a monster... please don't forsake me, let me help you get your revenge as well on Yukio Watanabe, the ninth diary holder."

He awaited the response almost as if he was waiting for a death blow.

Manga-Otaku
10-07-2007, 12:17 AM
Is that me? Because my characters last name is watanabe. Dam..

MangaAddict
10-07-2007, 12:18 AM
Thats me MO, I dont think Excels character has met yours...

Manga-Otaku
10-07-2007, 12:21 AM
Wth....Your Yukio? Weird...

Excel-Kleinwald
10-07-2007, 12:21 AM
the ninth is name Watanabe MO

Manga-Otaku
10-07-2007, 12:22 AM
Well here lets make a twist if that is alright with you. ::bows::

MangaAddict
10-07-2007, 12:23 AM
Oh right, I forgot about that. When we made the ninths name we didnt know your characters last name was watanabe...
Go ahead and do what you want with it, MO!

Manga-Otaku
10-07-2007, 12:32 AM
Is Yukio a boy or girl first of all?

Excel-Kleinwald
10-07-2007, 12:34 AM
The ninth is an adult male who is into torturing others. Alberio was going to include the ninth as well I believe...

MangaAddict
10-07-2007, 12:34 AM
Hes an older man with OCD and he watches people finding their fears before killing them. He likes to use peoples fears while slowly torturing them to death. Hes neat, clean, and a phsycho. His diary is a digital camera that shows a person fears...

Manga-Otaku
10-07-2007, 12:35 AM
Hmmm....How about Karin's uncle...Or even better. Father.

Excel-Kleinwald
10-07-2007, 12:37 AM
I doubt he'd have a kid... the way I see it, he would kill whoever got close to him... but hey, it is up to you on how to work it out.

Manga-Otaku
10-07-2007, 12:39 AM
Maybe Yukio abandoned Karin or she got taken away by her mother and he hasn't seen her in years. And now later seeing her again is out to kill her and her mother?

Excel-Kleinwald
10-07-2007, 12:41 AM
Don't ask us... it's your character.

MangaAddict
10-07-2007, 12:42 AM
Just remember that hes also after Ephrem and Ayane...

Manga-Otaku
10-07-2007, 12:43 AM
I'm asking for opinions. And that could be why he went insane abuse so he went to jail for many years and escaped. Using his new diary! Muahaha! Perfect~

Excel-Kleinwald
10-07-2007, 12:44 AM
closing old thread, opening new thread...