The Six Elements

[Necrosis]

There was a world were humans mange to control the elements. They used this power to make themselfs stronger. Each element granted them a power. Fire could turn there weapons on fire and sheilds on fire making there attack far more lethal. Earth could turn there outer skin into rock making there defense and hand to hand attack much better. Water could let people heal at an extremly quick rate. Wind could let one move at high speeds. Eventully a war broke out between there four elements. The war lasted for a 100 years. Then there was one finnaly battle between the four elements. This battle would decided the winner of the war. Just as the battle began they saw a meteor in the sky. It split into two large pieces. One piece of the meteor hit the battlefield killing almost everyone there. The rest where killed off by an unkowned creature. All four elements were weak by the lost of all there troops then suddenly the Four Devils appeared to Earth and Fire they offered them a chance to join there side in exchange they would crash there enimes. As for Water and Air they were visited by 6 angels. They offered them a chance of peace and justice in exchange to defeat the darkness that had come and the four devils. This war lasted for 20 years. With no side of clear victory. Then earth, water, fire and wind entered an alliance. They ended there own wars and became neutral on the war between light and darkness. Yet some people still joined the war. For the darkness to increase there armies they created werewolfs, vampires and orcs. To counter this the light made elfs. The war continued and this is were the story begins. (Sorry for the spelling mistakes)


The 6 Elements
Kab the Dragon Slayer

Chapter 1:
Path to Chaos

There once was a mercenary town. This town was made out of wind element people. Yet they offered there service to anyone who paid them enough. In that mercenary town was a young boy named Kab lived there. He was 9 years old. He had red hair and grey eyes. Then a huge red dragon appeared. Dragons had stood unrivaled nothing could match there power especially red dragons. The dragon opened his mouth. Kab best friend was near the dragon. What Kab saw next changed his life. Kab saw his best friend get brunt alive and die right in front of eyes. Kab parents then came in. His father was armed with a sword and shield. His mother was armed with two katars. His mother jump at the dragon trying to slay it. The dragon tail suddenly appeared around his mother and began to choke her. Kab father charged at the dragon. The Dragon then bite Kab father. He began to eat him alive. The Dragon then ate his mother. Kab was horrified at the site. Seeing his parents cry out in pain and dying. The dragon then moved its tail and destroyed several houses and pushing Kab onto a piece of wood on the river. Kab was knock out but safely floated down the river. The Dragon then destroyed the rest of the village and ate everyone in it. When Kab woke up there were 5 people standing near him. Two of them were males and the other were all females. The first male was a chaos knight. A knight that had followed the path of light and darkness. The other male was assassin. They were quick and could disappear in front of your sight and move extremely fast. The first female was also a chaos knight. The second female was an assassin to. The third female was a wizard.

Male Chaos Knight: “What happened to you?”

Kab then remembered everything. He told them everything.

Female Assassin: “I say we let him join our group.”

Male Assassin: “He can join but we go after the dragon last.”

Kab: “What do you mean by that?”

Female Chaos Knight: “Like you we all have tragic past. I saw my family got killed by a werewolf.”

Male Chaos Knight: “My family was killed by a necromancer who raised my dead father from the dead and used him to kill my entire family.”

Male Assassin: “My family was killed off by vampires expect my sister who was turned into one.”

Female Assassin: “My family was killed by a prince so he could become the king.”

Female Wizard: “My father was killed by my uncle so he could gain some of his magical powers.”

Male Chaos Knight: “I guess we should introduce ourselves. I am Rick, the male assassin is Kyle, the female chaos knight is Katharine, the female assassin is Trin, and the wizard is Kathy.

Trin: “So will join us?”

Kab: “You are all great warriors how would I help you?”

Kyle: “We will train you of course.”

Kab: “I have no other path, besides next would make me happier then to see that dragon die.”

Rick: “Excellent your training will begin tomorrow. Welcome to the path of revenge and chaos.”



Chapter 2
Road of Revenge

Killer
Assassin
Betrayer

Five years pass. Kab had received basic weapons training. Under the guidance of Rick, Kyle, Katharine, Trin and Kathy he had become a strong warrior but nothing compared to the others. Rick then asks Kab a question.

Rick: Kab have you ever wondered what kind of fighter you will be? Like a chaos knight or wizard.

Kab: Yes, I have put a lot of thought in it. This path may be hard but it will be the best path for me if I wish to get my revenge. I have decided to become a sword wizard.

Rick: You do realize that becoming a sword wizard is almost impossible. It requires one to become extremely good with a sword and magic. He has to be able to use his sword to strike and defend him self. He also has to use magic to enchant his sword, himself, others and to attack. It is said that you need an elementlist sword men and a god wizard to train you in order to become one.

Kab: God wizard are able to create there own dimension and even summon dragons. Yet I have done a little research on the swords wizard and they can be trained by people who will become a God wizard. Kathy is training to become a god wizard. So she could train me. As for elementlist swords men that can be bypass by two ways. One if they person himself is an elementlist and has the power of the four elements. The other way is if he gets trained by four swords men from four different elements.

Rick: It is you’re path. If you wish to walk you may. I will not stop you but I will try to guide you.

Kab: Thank you.

Rick: I guess we should start your training. It will be much harder then the training that you already have gone through.

Kab: I wouldn’t have it any other way.

Rick: Good then let’s get started.

Four more years pass. During this time Kab had become a sword wizard. For a sword wizard he was extremely weak yet he was still extremely powerfully. Rick had called the group for a meeting.

Rick: The time for my revenge has come. Today I shall have my blood lust.

Kyle: So you finally found him.

Trin: This is going to be fun.

Katharine: So it begins today.

Kathy: This brings all of us one step closer to our revenge.

Kab: The necromancer. I’ll try not to weaken him to much.

Rick: Don’t get to over confident. He commands an army of 1000 undead troops plus 100 undead mages and 10 doppelgangers.

Kyle: I hate doppelgangers.

Trin: I hate them more.

Rick: Doppelgangers are hated by assassins since they copy skills but not magic. This makes them hard to be defeated by assassins but easily defeated by wizards.

Kab: I’ll try not to kill them all.

Rick: You become pretty confident in your abilities after you mastered the basics of a sword wizard.

Kab: If magic fails then I use my sword. If my sword fails then I use magic. If both fail then I use both at the same time.

Kathy: Sword wizards easily adapted to situations and can take down almost any opponent.

Kab: That’s why I become one.

Rick: He lives in an old castle which is guarded by his undead minions. He will strike at sun set. Since sun set is my favorite time. It looks like a huge mountain of blood.

Kab: Ya, it does remind me of blood. I like to think that’s it’s all of the dragons blood spilled out.

Rick: All rights lets move.


WARNING THIS CHAPTER IS FOR A MATURE ADUIANCE
(Note: no there is no porn or anything like that).

Chapter 3
Omen

Kab: No

Kab fell on his knees. Tears fell from his eyes. Rick then charge at the red dragon. The dragon then suddenly appeared behind Rick.

Kab: First Kathy now you’re going to kill Rick. I won’t ****ing let you. I’m going to ****ing kill you.

Kab charge at the dragon but then felt something hard and sharp hit his stomach. He was push back several feet. Kab had been hit by the dragon’s tail. Blood poured out of his stomach but the wound wasn’t fatal.

Kab: Damm

Rick jump at the dragon at lighting speed and swung his sword. Yet he hit nothing but air the dragon had disappeared from his sight. Rick turned his head only to see the eyes of the dragon.

Dragon: Foolish humans you actually think you can defeat me?

Rick: Take this. Chaos of Oblivion.

Suddenly out of Ricks hand shoot black meteors with green clouds. The Dragon was impaled by all of them.

Rick: That should take care of him.

Rick turned back at Kab and began to walk to him. Suddenly the Dragon rose up and opened his mouth. Rick turned and look in horror as there was nothing he could as the dragon was about to eat him. Suddenly he disappeared.

Kyle: You shouldn’t let you’re guard down.

Ken then look back and saw Kyle holding Rick.

Rick: Thanks.

Ken began to heal his wounds.

Dragon: Foolish humans you are only making you lives more miserable before you die. All that waits you is pain and death. Why don’t you give up now and have a painless death.

Ken: After what you did to Kathy I will never give up.

Dragon: Foolish humans. I have lived for thousand years only rivaled by my older brother until 180 years ago. You think you can just come in and defeat me. I don’t know what the celestials see in you?

Ken: It’s not what they sees in us its what they don’t see in you.

Dragon: Big words for a little man.

Suddenly a huge fireball was headed towards Ken. He couldn’t dodge it but he could use his shield to defend himself. He put the shield in between himself and the fireball. He then felt a sudden push that nearly causes him to lose his shield. His arms began to fell as if they were on fire then the pressure stop and his arms felt normal again.

Dragon: You may have survived what about your two friends?

Kab looks back and saw two skeletons. There was no mistake it was Rick and Kyle. Ken then heard a whisper.

A female whisper: It’s not too late?

Kab: What. Who said that?

Kab look around but only saw Katherine and Trin charging at the dragon.

Dragon: Let me show you what real power is.

Suddenly there was a huge explosion. Kab then found himself partly buried by rocks. He then felt a sudden burning feeling all over his body. His entire body had been brunt.

Female Voice: It’s not too late.

Kab: Who… said that?

Dragon: Who are you talking to?

Black Dragon maybe it was that girl that were going to kill?

Kab was suddenly standing. His skin had been replace by that of a red and black dragon. He then look to the right. It was the dragon that killed everyone he knew but its head and its neck had replace Kab shoulder. Kab yelled out in horror.

Black Dragon: Why do you yell?

Kab then look to the left and saw the dragon’s older brother. Like its brother its head and neck had replace Kab shoulder. Kab then realize he had became a dragon hybrid. He had merged with that he hated the most. Kab yelled out in horror. Suddenly he got up from his bed.

Kab: Was that a dream? No that was way to realistic. I can still feel some of the pain. What the **** was that.

Female Voice: It’s not late.

Rick: Kab you ok we heard some yelling.

Kab: Just a nightmare that’s all.

Rick: Alright.

Rick then went back to sleep.

Female Voice: I can stop it all if you just give yourself up to me.

Kab: Ignored the voice and feel back to sleep.


Chapter 4
Satan Warning

Somewhere in a dark valley a being enters a cave.

???: So this is the place that he wanted to meet me. Looks like he has something every important to say to me.

???: I’m glad that you made 1st angel.

1st angel: Ah Satan it’s been a long time since we meet. 200 years correct.

Satan: Yes it has been 200 years since the meteor hit earth and you angels have been trying to redeem the humans.

1st angel: So what did you want to talk to me about.

Satan: I need you to kill Kab.

1st angel: That poor soul. I still sense there is some good in him.

Satan: When you came to earth your powers and knowledge was restricted just like Lucifer and the other devils. I have seen the future. Kab is a huge threat to the light he must be dealt with.

1st angel: Even the visions of an angel in heaven can be wrong what makes you think your vision is right. Only God knows what will truly happen.

Satan: I don’t know why you always defend humans. They are evil.

1st angel: You’re starting to sound like Lucifer. I was surprised when you decided not to join him. Seeing how you both hate humans.

Satan: I would never join Lucifer. That guy gives humans an excuse for all the evil things that they do. One day I will pass judgment on him. Even though I’m in Heaven and he is in Hell that punishment is not good enough.

1st angel: Satan you should be here helping the humans instead of being in heaven judging them when they die trying to convince God that there evil.

Satan: I go where I belong.

1st angel: Satan you never change. You see humans as evil and is this why you want me to kill him.

Satan: Humans are evil but this one is a great threat kill him now.

1st angel: Thou shall not kill.

Satan: That rule only applies to humans.

1st angel: What kind of an example will we be setting if we don’t follow God law.

Satan: If you won’t kill him then train at least 10 knights to specifically kill him.

1st angel: I shall train 10 knights to capture him.

Satan: You are too soft. When you take away what humans care about they turn evil. That is what happened to Kab.

1st angel: Kab is just a person who’s been at the wrong place at the wrong time. He is innocent.

Satan: There is no such thing as innocent’s only degrees of guilt.

1st angel: I already give you my answer. Besides Satan I am in command of the forces here on earth not you.

Satan: I have not forgotten.

1st angel: Good now you may tell the other angels of him but do not try to convince them.

Satan: As you wish. For I follow God plan.

1st angel: I am glad that you did not fall.

Satan: For I shall never fall. I will always answer follow God path.

1st angel: Then we have nothing else to talk about.

Satan: No.

1st angel: Understood.

The 1st angel then left the cave and spread his wings out and began to fly into the clouds. As for Satan his presence disappeared and returned to heaven where he would continue his job as an accuser. Elsewhere near an old destroyed castle.

Kab: So this is where that necromancer lives?

Rick: Ya, now I will finally have my revenge.


Chapter 5
Castle of 1000 Undead

Kab: Finally a chance to test out my new powers.

Rick: I can feel my adrenaline pumping. Its feels so good!

Kathy: So how are we going to do this? Quietly or just charge through the front gate?

Rick: I want him to know were coming so were charging through the front gate.

Kathy: Dang I was hoping we could end this quickly.

Rick: I want him to suffer.

Kab: I wouldn’t have it any other way.

Rick: I have waited 18 long years for this moment. Now I will have my revenge.

Kyle: Less talk more action.

Katharine: I agree.

Trin: Then what are we waiting for.

They walk up towards the castle. Several skeletons in amour began to approach them. They had axes and were wearing old worn out amour.

Rick: Kathy would you like to do the honors?

Kathy: Gladly.

Kathy then said some strange words. Kab understood them. They were usually said before an area damaging spell. Suddenly a huge fire blast came out of her wand and completely destroyed the front gate and all the undead guarding it.

Katharine: Undead Archers at the top.

Kab: I’m on it.

Kab said some strange words. Suddenly his sword glowed red and he then swing his sword. Out of his sword came a huge flame burning all the undead archers on top of the castle wall. The entire castle wall was lit on fire.

Kab: That was too easy.

Rick: He should defiantly know were coming now.

They then opened the front get. Suddenly a green fire ball was headed towards them. Kab got behind his shield. Kathy created a magical shield around her self. Everyone else jump out of the way. The fireball hit Kathy magical shield. The fireball blew up and the shield disappeared. They look at the direction of which the fireball came from. There were to undead skeletons standing. One of them had a green fireball in his hand.

Rick: Undead mages. I knew it wouldn’t be that easy.

The Undead mage shot the fireball at them.

Rick: I wonder what stronger? A fireball or a meteor? Chaos of Oblivion.

Suddenly out of Ricks hand came out several meteors. It completely destroyed the fireball and the two undead mages.

Rick: I guess I expected too much out of them.

Kab: Shall we move on to the next floor.

Rick: Hopefully they will be more of a challenge.

Rick led the way upstairs. He opened the door.

Werewolf: Looks like our guest have made it here.

Werewolf #2: I can’t wait to eat them.

Katharine suddenly cut the werewolf in half.

Katharine: I’m going to ****ing kill you all.

Katharine: Chaos of Armageddon.

Suddenly a huge meteor hit the castle and killed every single werewolf.

Kab: Don’t you think you over did it?

Katharine: They got what they ****ing deserved.

Rick: Let’s move on.

They entered the third floor.

Trin: Coffins.

Kyle: Vampires. I’m going to kill them all.

Kathy: No if you kill one they will all awake.

Kyle: I don’t care as long as they all die.

Kyle began to kill the vampires one by one. Suddenly all the vampires woke up.

Vampire: Who dares to interrupt our sleep?

Kyle: I ****ing do!

Kyle then threw an explosive at the wall. The sunlight then entered causing all the vampires to light on fire and die a slow painfully death.

Kyle: Good radiance. Let’s get moving.

Rick opened the door that lead to the next floor.

Necromancer: At Rick it’s been a long time. If I knew you were going to be this strong I would have killed you and turn you into an undead just like your father.

Rick: Don’t you ****ing dare speak about my father. I’m going to kill you even if I have to die in the process.


Chapter 6
A Son Nightmare.

Necromancer: Maybe you would like to see your father. He sure has been usefully.

Suddenly an undead came out of the shadow.

Rick: Fa…ther?

Necromancer: Yes. He is still here. Soon I will be able to completely resurrect humans and in time even put back there souls in there body.

Rick: What?

Necromancer: That’s right. I could bring back your family all you would have to do is serve me.

Rick: You could… bring back my entire… family?

Necromancer: Yes. In time but you must swear loyalty to me.

Kathy: Don’t do it. Usually the price of necromancer is necrosis or death.

Rick: Yet he can bring them back.

Kathy: No he can’t. That’s a lie. God himself would interfere if that happened.

Kab: She is probably right about that.

Rick: You guys are right.

Necromancer: To bad. It’s your lost. I could have given you something greater then revenge.

Rick: Shut up. I’m going to ****ing kill you.

Rick suddenly charges at the necromancer. Suddenly a figure moves in the way. Rick stops dead in his tracks.

Rick: Damm you. Using my father against me.

Necromancer: Haha… that’s what you get for trying to defeat me.

Kab: You really are dead.

Necromancer: After I kill him and turn him into an undead I will do the same to you.

Kab: I’d like to see you try. Even if you somehow mange to kil me you won’t be able to turn me into an undead.

Necromancer: Why not?

Kab: Simply cause I’m a sword wizard.

Necromancer: But trying to turn you into an undead will give me lots of information about the human body and soul. It will bring me one step closer into resurrecting someone.

Kathy: You actually think you can bring back the dead with there souls? You do relize even angels have a hard time doing this and when they do the person is bound to the angel. The weaker the angel gets the weaker the person gets.

Necromancer: Then I shall surpass them.

Rick: You’re ****ing insane.

Necromancer: Enough talk, minions kill them all.

Suddenly several undead vampires and werewolves entered. Rick suddenly felt a dagger go through his chest. Rick fell to the ground.

Necromancer: Just like the rest of you family. You will die by your father’s hands. You are too afraid to attack him. That is your weakness. That is why you will never defeat me. That is why you will DIE TODAY!

Rick: NEVER!

Rick suddenly appeared behind his father. His father spilt into two and then felt apart.

Necromancer: Looks like I under estimated you. Bone Wave of Death!

Suddenly hundreds of bones came in front of Rick. Rick began to swing his sword. His sword then began to release a dark green mist. The entire bone wall completely collapsed. Rick charge at the necromancer.

Necromancer: Bone Shield.

Suddenly several bones came around the necromancer. Yet it only slowed down Rick as he completely destroyed it with his sword.

Necromancer: Bone Spear!

Suddenly a spear came towards Rick completely made out of bones. Rick lances his sword at it. The spear then fell apart into two pieces.

Necromancer: Imposs…

Rick was suddenly beside the necromancer with his sword through it chest.

Necromancer: Ible… gah.

The Necromancer fell down and died.

Rick: I still want more. It’s not good enough.

Kab: Don’t worry we still have many more enemies.

Rick: True but first I want to bury my father. Give him a proper funeral.

Kathy: We understand.

Elsewhere in a desert.

???: What the hell how are you not dead? You’re a pure blood vampire.

Converse: I am converse the unkillable pure blood vampire. You are nothing more then a half vampire. Which makes you luckly since anyone else would have died due to the sunlight but that does not mean you will live Katoru.

Katoru: I’ve tried everything on you. Garlic, steak through the heart, silver, sunlight. Why won’t you DIE?

Converse: Why should I answer the questions of a half vampire? Espically one who hunts them.

Katoru: You’re wounds heal faster then that of a normal vampire.

Converse: Enough talk. I have all the required materials to kill a half vampire.

Katoru: You won’t kill me today. Teleportation!

Suddenly a blue light completely outshines everything.

Converse: Damm magic. Whatever, he does not matter. For I must find the others then I will be unstoppable.

Converse then began to walk further into the dessert.

Meanwhile in the city of Lucent.

1st Angel: You ten are my strongest warriors. You are quick, smart and powerfully. Yet you are kind and follow the light. An angel from heaven appeared to me and warned me about a human who has been suffering his entire life. He has sent his entire life to revenge. He represents a great threat to the light. I want you ten to capture him but before you go out to capture him. You receive specially training from me directly.

Holy Knight: It is an honor.

Holy Knight 2: We will not fail.

Holy Knight 3: We will follow the path of god.

1st Angel then let us began.


Chapter 7
The Unknowed

Satan: There are still a few who I could get to help me out. Although they are dark they can be redeemed.

Female Voice: I think you have already interfered enough.

Satan: You. This is all you’re doing.

Female Voice: It’s been a while Satan. Last we saw each other is when I joined Lucifer and was cast to hell.

Satan: Ten years later you betrayed him and became a fallen angel. Now you are a fallen angel. Somewhere between good and evil.

Female Voice: Wrong. I am something far greater.

Satan: You may see yourself as something greater but I will always view you as a fallen angel.

Female Voice: You’re always so judgmentally. It will be your undoing. Besides the world needs good and evil. That’s why I am here. Now you choose to stay in heaven and not to interfere with the lives of humans. I on the other end didn’t. Now leave.

Satan: This isn’t over. He will die on way or the other.

Satan then leaves. Elsewhere at a waterfall in a desert.

Kab: This time you’re going down.

Rick: You’re getting good.

Kab run up towards Rick and swung his sword. Rick simply put his sword in front of him and block the blow. The two swordsmen swords were being push against each other. Kab was trying to overpower Rick. Rick was simply just holding his sword in place.

Ken (struggling): Lets see you block this.

Kab then said some odd words and suddenly his sword began to glow yellow. Kab began to overpower Rick. Rick could no longer hold Kab sword with his own and jump into the air.

Kab: I have you now.

Kab then swung his sword and a yellow light came out of his sword and was headed towards Rick.

Rick: ****. Demonic Tap.

Suddenly around Rick body and sword green scars appeared. Rick then swung his sword at the light. Suddenly there was a huge flash. The light was to bright and Kab closed his eyes. When he opened them Rick had his sword on Kab throat.

Rick: You almost had me there.

Kab: Next time I will win.

Rick: You are getting much better.

Katherine: Alright you to we are going to Desoraty. That is where the werewolf that killed my family is.

Kab: You already found him. That was pretty quick.

Katherine: Those bloody werewolves’s will die. Not only will I kill the werewolf that killed my family but also every other single werewolf that I meet.

Rick: It will be a wonderfully sight.

Kab: That means I will be one step closer to my own revenge.

Rick: Yes, soon we will all have our revenge.

Katherine: Now let’s get going.

Elsewhere in a road that leads to Desoraty.

Katoru: So this is the city that has been completely overrun by werewolves. This will make it the perfect hiding place for a while. Werewolf’s in fact like vampire hunters like myself epically if were demi-vampires.

Katoru then enters the city.

Three hours later on the same road.

Kyle: This is going to be so boring. There isn’t a single vampire in this town.

Katherine: Don’t worry you will get your revenge to.

Kyle: I have waited for a long time. Each day is like a being stab in the heart by a poisons knife.

Kab: I understand what you mean. We will all get revenge. Those who oppose us will get there retribution.

Kathy: Enough talking lets get this over with.

Katherine: She right. Let’s go.

Kathy: Hold on. Where Rick?

Kab: I think he already in the city.

Katherine: I guess we will do this quietly then. Will enter the city and we will attack at night when there is no moonlight.

Kab: Kicking them while there down. You really are cruel.

Katherine: I want them to suffer just like I did. They will be helpless as I kill there friends and will only be able to watch and realize that they are next.

Katherine and everyone else entered the city. Katoru several odd people enter the city.

Katoru: Those guys aren’t werewolves. Are they vampire hunters? Wait. That look in there eyes. They must be werewolf hunters. There going to kill everyone in this village. I better prepare to defend myself when they decided to attack.

Katoru got up and went inside.

Kab: Do you think that guy is on to us.

Katherine: Let them come. We will kill them all in the end.

Kyle: That guy. Is he a vampire? I’m not sure.

Kathy: A vampire in a town like this. You must be joking. Probably a hunter who carrying something that makes him seen like a vampire.

Kyle: You’re probably right. Now let’s go.

[x04ty29er]

Excellent job! This is definitely art XD. Is it going to go on?

[Necrosis]

Of course it will.

[Raijuu]

wow that was awsome nice work! ;)

[SilverKunai]

And this is our first ever fanfiction on the site..

I wonder if I still have some of my stories from back then on my comp..

Hmm..

[Necrosis]

Chapter 8
The Slaughter

Kab: Ah the sunset. This is how the town will look like when were done with it. It will completely be covered in blood. It will be one beautiful sight.

Katherine: Yes it will be. It will send a message to all werewolves and everyone else who oppose us. This will tell them to fear us and to prepare for there end.

Kab: Revenge it such a sweet thing. It grants one much power. Makes one nearly unstoppable.

Kathy: Carefully there are far greater powers. After this we will have to lay low for a while. We are attracting too much attention.

Kab: It only a matter of time before we get our revenge. After that our power will be so great it will even challenge that of the devils and angels.

Kathy: Don’t get overconfident. The power of a Dragon may rival the power of a celestial but it is still no match for them.

Kab: A human can become just as powerfully as an angel. You do remember Silkit.

Kathy: How can I forget about him? He was a prophet of god. Making him even stronger then an angel but he received his power directly form God. We will never gain that kind of power. Only those directly chosen by God will gain that power.

Katherine: Enough talk. Let not look to far ahead besides the sun has set and there is no moon today. That means it’s time to strike.

Kab: Then let it begin.

Kathy: I will get the others.

Kathy walks away to another part of the city. Kab says several odd words and suddenly a red fire begins to consume his entire body.

Katherine: That interesting version of a teleportation.

Kab then reappeared on top of a building.

Kab: Look like she already found them.

Kathy returns with Rick, Kyle and Trin.

Kab: Shall we get this party started?

Katherine: I have waited 18 years for this. I think we’ve all waited long enough. Let’s get this started. Kathy you go outside the city and create a wall to stop any werewolf’s form escaping.

Kathy: Understood.

Kathy moved her wand and suddenly a light blue covered her and she disappeared. She then reappeared outside of the city.

Kathy: Which spell should I use? Ah this one should do nicely. Blood Flame!

Suddenly a huge wall made out of blood completely covered the city.

Inside the city.

Kab: What a beautifully sight. Now time to bring out the werewolf’s.

Kab stabs his sword inside the building. Suddenly a pillar of fire came out of his sword and went right through the building till it hit the bottom floor. Suddenly there was a huge explosion and the building collapse. Kab landed behind Katherine.

Katherine: Well done.

Several werewolf’s came out but since there was no moon they were in there human form.

Werewolf: What do you think you are doing?

Katherine: What does it look like? Were going to kill you all.

Werewolf: There might not be a moon today but the devil has given us another curse which will give us the advantage.

Katherine suddenly looks behind. She then smiles and begins to laugh.

Katherine: There you are. I finally found you. The one who killed my entire family. Look at you. Weak and unable to defend yourself.

Werewolf #2: I might not be able to defend myself but we have a secret weapon.

Kab: What’s that? A vampire hunter?

Werewolf #2: No a new type of werewolf. One that never enters his human form. They are called wolf demons.

Suddenly out of nowhere a wolf demon lands on the ground.

Wolf Demon: Now you will die at my hands.

Katherine: I can take care of him. The rest of you spread out and kill any werewolf’s you see expect that one over there who killed my family. He will be the last one to die and he will be killed by me.

Rick: Alright let’s go.

The rest of the group spread out killing any werewolf’s they meet. Elsewhere at the city gate.

Werewolf #3: What is this bloody thing?

Werewolf #4: I don’t care I’m going through.

The werewolf jump at the Blood Flame he went through it but then yield out in pain.

Kathy: Foolish werewolf. The Blood Flame turns all you blood into fire killing the creature very quickly but very painfully.

Soon there was nothing left of the werewolf who went through the Blood Flame. Back in the city Kab was killing everyone he saw. Cutting of there limbs first. Making them suffer then either cutting there heads off or stabbing them in the heart. Suddenly Katoru appeared.

Kab: Well if it isn’t the vampire hunter. Have you come to join them or maybe you decided to help us out?

Katoru: You are pathetic. Killing creatures when they cannot defend themselves.

Kab: I’m just giving them a taste of there own medicine.

Katoru: You are no better then them.

Kab: Enough talk. I can tell you are going to stop me. So you leave me with no choice.

Kab said several odd words and suddenly a meteor fell. Katoru barely dodge it. His arm was badly brunt form the attack. Then it began to heal.

Kab: Are you a vampire? No you can’t be one. Maybe you’re a new type of creature created by a devil?

Katoru then took out his sword.

Katoru: This sword has killed over hundred vampires. It is made out of silver.

Kab: So that sword gives you the powers of a vampire without the side effects.

Katoru: Wrong!

Katoru charge at Kab. He jumped in the air and began to swing his sword. Suddenly he felt a sharp pain at his heart. He looked at his chest and saw Kab sword had gone right through his heart. Kab suddenly stabs the ground with his sword pinning Katoru to the ground. Katoru tried to remove the sword form his heart but it wouldn’t move. Kab then uses his shield to behead Katoru. Kab then removed his sword and walk away.

Katoru: Where are you going? I can still fight.

Kab look back and saw Katoru had fully healed and was standing up.

Kab: I understand what you are. You are a demi-vampire. That’s why they let you in this town. That’s why sunlight doesn’t work on you. Yet you cannot defeat me. I know how to kill you’re kind. It is hard but I can do it.

Katoru: That may be true but I got leave now but here’s a present.

Katoru was suddenly beside Kab and biting his neck. Kab punches him away.

Kab: Vampire bite rush. A very fast and deadly attack. Even I have a hard time dealing with it. Only half vampires and pure blood vampires can perform that attack. Yet when a half vampire uses it, the only effect it has is it makes the opponent weaker due to blood lose.

Katoru: It also leaves my trace behind. Meaning anyone looking for me will find you instead.

Kab: Let them come. I will kill them all.

Katoru: It been fun talking but now I must leave.

Suddenly a bright blue light covered Katoru and he vanish.

Kab: Dam, whatever it does no matter and seeing how he is a hunter that means vampires will be coming after me. This should make Kyle happy.

Else where at the center of the town where Katherine was fighting the wolf demon. Katherine and the Wolf Demon jump in the air. Katherine swings her sword and the wolf demon swings his claw. They both landed on the ground. Suddenly the Wolf Demon fell into two pieces.

Katherine: That leaves only you. All the other werewolf’s have been killed. This city is covered in blood. Isn’t it a beautifully sight. Now you will become part of this beautifully sight.

The werewolf took out a dagger and charged at Katherine. He stab Katherine in the stomach.

Katherine: Is that all you got?

Katherine then beheaded the werewolf with her sword.

Katherine: That was too easy. I guess I will keep his head as a trophy.

Katherine picks up the werewolf head and put it in a jar. She then put it in her back pack.

The rest of group come covered in blood of the werewolf’s they killed.

Katherine: This feeling feels great. Yet tomorrow it will be gone. I want to feel this feeling again.

Kab: Give it some time. For now we must hide.

Rick: Kab you got bitten by a vampire.

Kab: Not to worry he was only a half vampire. He left his mark on me so those hunting him would come to me instead of him. That means we will be getting some vampires visiting us.

Rick: To think I was about to kill you because you were going to become a vampire.

Kathy: Alright we got to go.

The group leaves the town which was completely covered in blood.


Chapter 9
The Crusade Beings

Kab: That feeling was great. Yet now it’s gone. I want to feel it again. The taste of revenge.

Katherine: It was so sweet now it’s gone. I want more.

Rick: I feel myself getting stronger each time I taste it.

Kab: So how long will we be hiding for.

Kyle: For a week then we will hunt down the vampire that killed my family and turned my sister into a vampire.

Kab: You already found him?

Kyle: Yes I did. One of the werewolves’s told me in exchange I would spare his life but in the end he died when he went through the Fire blood wall.

Rick: What a fool. Did he actually think he would live?

Kab: That’s a werewolf for you. Did he say anything about your sister?

Rick: No but I found out the vampire was a pure blood.

Kab: Damm. Those vampires are harder to kill. Garlic and silver just makes them weaker and the stake through the heart doesn’t work on them.

Rick: Do not worry we will kill him.

Kab: What about your sister.

Rick: Take her as a prisoner and after we get our revenge search for the exiler.

Elsewhere near a fire city.

Katoru: Damm those guys were tough I need to get stronger in order to defeat them.

???: Half Vampire will you join me in my journey? You are powerfully and you follow the way of the light. You would be usefully.

Katoru: Who are you?

Alex 2nd: My name is Alex 2nd son of Alex 1st.

Katoru: What no way. Alex 1st as in the one who nearly won the 100 year.

Alex 2nd: Yes I am his son. I have to join the forces of light and darkness and the original 4 elements to get rid of a force that will make a war that will never end.

Katoru: Join the Light and Darkness? How do you plan to do that.

Alex 2nd: I plan on defeating the leader in a duel.

Katoru: You actually think you can defeat the 1st Angel and the 1st Devil.

Alex 2nd: I know I can defeat them with this sword. An angel appeared to me and told me of a force that must be destroyed. This sword told me how to do it.

Katoru: I think you’re insane.

Alex 2nd: Then I will defeat you then less then half a second to prove it.

Katoru: You can’t be serious.

Alex 2nd: Then let us begin.

Katoru: I’m ready.

Suddenly Alex 2nd appeared behind Katoru. Katoru suddenly felt a burning feeling on his face. His head had been cut in two at a 45 degree angel. Something was wrong. His powers were gone. He felt weak, weaker then a human, he knew he was going to die. He fell on his knees then Alex 2nd appeared and put his sword on the place he had slashed him. Suddenly his powers returned.

Katoru: You just might be able to defeat them. I will follow you on your journey.

Alex 2nd: Also you may now use the power of light that is used by both Elves and Humans.

Katoru: What? Are you kidding me.

Alex 2nd: No I am not. Now you are a real vampire hunter. Vampire will now fear you.

Katoru: I don’t know what to say.

Alex 2nd: Just follow me and support me. I may lead you to death and even a place worse then hell but in the end it will be worth it and God himself will reward us.

Katoru: You have my loyalty.

Alex 2nd: Good now let us continue our journey. We will need an army before I can challenge the 1st angel. I want you to seek out any vampire hunters. It will take many years to gather an army and join the forces of good and evil.

Katoru: What could be possible worse then pure darkness?

Alex 2nd: Something that makes sure pure darkness never disappears.

Katoru look confused. Alex 2nd began to walk away. Katoru began to run after him.

Else where in a forest on a high mountain near a village.

Kab: So this it?

Kyle: Ya, this is it.

Suddenly Kyle saw a girl waking in the village. Kyle couldn’t move. Rick knew it was a vampire.

Rick: You know she is a vampire.

Kyle: Of course she’s a vampire. She’s my sister. Looks like this will be a little harder then I thought.


Chapter 10
If you can’t beat them, join them?

Kab: This can’t be. I cannot be defeated. I will not…

???: You cannot hope to defeat me but if you join me I can give you everything you want. Just serve me.

Kab: Nev…er

The girl continued to thrust her sword right through Kab heart. She had grey eye’s and silver hair.

Kab: Who are you? How can you defeat me so easily?

???: Join me and I will grant you power far greater then this.

Kab: Never!

Suddenly Kab began to transform into a demi-dragon. Out of one shoulder came out a dragon head and neck then another one on his other shoulder. His skin was replaced that of a red and black dragon.

Girl: No matter how strong or good you get you will never be able to defeat me.

Kab two dragon head each shot out a breath of fire. Suddenly Kab fell on the ground. His dragon heads had been cut off and his entire body has received fatal injuries. This was it. He was going to die here.

Kab: Not like this. NOT LIKE THIS!!!

Rick: Kab you ok?

Kab got out of his bed.

Kab: Just a nightmare.

Rick: I think that dragon curse you into having these nightmares.

Kab: Once I kill that dragon I will be able to sleep normally again. Just another reason for me to kill it.

Rick: Kyle is prepared to attack the village. He wants this actually to be kept quiet. So we are going to sneak in, kill the leader and capture his sister.

Kab: I prefer to attack head on. Yet this is not my revenge it is his.

Rick: Let’s go the others are waiting.

Rick and Kab meet up with the rest of the group.

Kyle: About time you got here. If we only kill the vampire leader and capture my sister this will cause them to suspect each other and kill each other. To me that is a perfect revenge. I want to live in fear for the rest of there lives.

Kathy: Alright let’s get this started. There seems to be one pure blood and many turn blood. It seems that the pure blood vampire is with one other vampire. A female one.

Kyle: Alright did you think you can teleport us in?

Kathy: No it seems there is some kind of barrier. I believe it some kind of skull. No, it can’t be. It is the skull of Deamon the 0th devil or the 1st demon.

Kyle: Wait I thought Deamon was just a myth.

Kab: I’ve never heard of this daemon guy.

Kathy: Human has believed in god before the arrival of the angels and devils. Ever since humans have been alive we have believed. The angels were in heaven and the devils and daemons and demons were in hell.

Kab: I know but what does this have to do with anything.

Kathy: Just before the 100 year war the colonies of the four elements lived in peace. Then Deamon arrived. He found a way to escape form hell and keep all his powers and knowledge. In hell the 1st devil is called Lucifer his power and intelligence is 2nd only to god. He is considered a smaller version of god. Yet when he arrives on earth his powers and knowledge is restricted just like the angels. Yet with Deamon escape he kept all his powers and knowledge. It took a prophet of God to defeat him yet the prophet died in the battle. Yet before that moment he was unstoppable. After his defeat the colonies blamed each other of his release and went into war. So far he has been sealed for 952 years. They say that he is one of the reasons why the angels and devils came to earth.

Kab: So even in death he still causes trouble.

Kyle: Me and Trin will enter and destroy the skull

Kab: You sure you guys will be able to get in without being seen.

Kyle: We are assassins it is what we do.

Kyle and Trin entered the area. They kept in the shadows. The way they moved to avoid eye contact and sticking into the shadows. Kab even lost sight of them for a second. They entered the building. They waited a few seconds.

Kathy: The barrier is down, I’m going to teleport us in.

Kathy said a few odd words and suddenly they were inside the building.

Kyle: Alright now let’s…

A door suddenly opened. Rick turned around and then froze.

???: It’s been a long time brother.

Kyle: Eliza…

Eliza step towards Kyle, then Kab drew out his sword. Rick put his hand in front of Kab.

Rick: This is his revenge we will follow his path.

Kab put his sword away.

Eliza: What loyal friends you have. They will even follow you to death.

Eliza walked towards Kyle. She gentle put her hand on his cheek. Kyle didn’t do anything. It was as if he was frozen.

Eliza: These friends of yours look very handsome. Maybe I will marry one of them?

Eliza then touched Rick on his cheek. Rick didn’t do anything. Eliza then moved towards Kab. She was about to touch his cheek until Kab hit her hand away. Kyle was shock.

Kab: I don’t know what’s wrong with you but I am not going to die here.

Eliza: Why not join us?

Kyle didn’t know what to say. He couldn’t move any part of his body. He didn’t know what to do.


Chapter 11
Pure Blood

Suddenly a door opened. Kyle turned and then he saw the vampire that killed his family. He charged at the Vampire but then Eliza moved in the way. Kyle froze.

Kyle: Dam you, using my own sister as a shield. I’ll kill you.

Durlid: My name is Durlid. It’s nice to meet you. I am the pure blood vampire who leads this town of vampires. Now will you join me?

Kyle: Like hell I will.

Durlid: What about your sister?

Eliza: Yes what about me? Are you going to kill me to?

Kyle took a step back.

Kyle: I can’t do it.

Durlid: Now it’s time for you to join you sister.

Durlid then walk up to Kyle and was about to bite him. Suddenly he was punch and sent back a few feet.

Kab: I don’t know what wrong with you guys but there’s no way in hell I’m going to die here.

Durlid: Who said anything about dying? I’m going to turn you into a vampire.

Durlid suddenly appeared right in front of Kab and started to bite him. Kab thrust his sword through his chest.

Kab: Did I tell you that I was a sword wizard? That means that I can’t be turned into a vampire just like other wizards.

Durlid: Eliza take care of him.

Eliza charged at Kab. Just as she was about to bite him something sharp had went right through her chest. Kab had stabbed her in the stomach. He then kicked her chest and took his sword out of her at the same time.

Kyle: You killed her. You bastard!

Kyle started to charge at Kab.

Kab: Get a hold of yourself. She is a vampire. A wound like won’t kill her. She should be fine in a few minutes. Now that she is out of the picture get your revenge.

Kyle then charged at Durlid. Durlid suddenly appeared below him and stab his stomach with his own hands.

Kyle: What the hell?

Durlid: You actually think you could actually defeat a pure blood vampire?

Kyle: Even if I have to die, I am going to ****ing kill you.

Kyle charged at Durlid and used his after image mirage. It was an attack that made Kyle seemed he was in three places at once.

Kab: It looks like its do or die.

Kathy: After image uses speed and magic to make one appear in three different locations at once. If successfully Kyle should be able to kill the vampire but if the vampire hits the real Kyle then Kyle will have no way to defend himself, causing him to die.

Rick: Pretty risky. I always knew Kyle would do something like this.

The Vampire slash at one of the Kyle’s but it was an after image mirage. Suddenly the vampire head fell off and a katar went right through the heart.

Durlid (head) began to laugh.

Suddenly all his body parts turned into bats and reformed near the destroyed demon head.

Durlid: I was hoping I wouldn’t have to do this but you leave me with no choice.

Kyle: NO!

Durlid then ate the demon head. Kyle charged at him but was blown away by the wind. Suddenly Durlid began to turn red and grew 20 feet tall. Horns began to come out of his back, arms and legs

Durlid (with a demonic voice): Now I am a half demon half vampire. None may question me.

Kyle: Fool. You have a new body meaning you don’t know how to control it.

Durlid (Demonic Voice): Die fool.

Durlid then tried to punch Kyle but just before he hit him Kyle disappeared. Kyle then reappeared on top of his hand.

Kyle: You’re the one who’s going to die fool.

Kyle ran up his arm, put garlic in his mouth, a cross over him and stake through the heart. He then cut off Durlid head.

Durlid (Demonic Voice): That might have killed a pure blood vampire but not me.

Durlid then turned into a thousand bats which flew away.

Kyle: Damm, I let him get away.

Kathy: Oh I wouldn’t say that. I cast a spell on him letting me track him anywhere he goes.

Kyle: Thank you. Now let’s get my sister.

Kyle grab his sister who was still out cold form Kab attack.

Kyle: Kab do you put poison on your sword.

Kab: I always do.

Kyle: No wonder it’s taking her some time to heal. Kab and Kathy while we don’t have the Exiler she will have to drink from your blood.

Kab: Blood of a wizard can give a vampire resistance to sunlight and other things like that. It also makes there human side come back and weakens there vampire powers.

Durlid reformed his original body.

Durlid: Looks like I will have to heal in this body.

???: Oh a pure blood vampire.

Durlid turned around and saw another pure blood vampire.

Durlid: Who are you?

Converse: My name is Converse; I have come to kill you. When a pure blood vampire drinks all the blood of another pure blood vampire his powers increase by nearly twice his own power.

Durlid suddenly appeared right beside Converse and bite him.

Durlid: What? Why can’t I suck you blood?

Converse: I don’t have to tell you that.

Converse then began to suck Durlid blood.

Durlid: This can’t be!

Durlid body began to completely disappear. Converse had suck out all his blood. The remaining part of Durlid body turned into fire and was completely brunt away.

Converse: That was to… ahh what is this.

Durlid Voice: A good bye gift. I may be going to hell but I decided to take you with me. You’re going to die since my blood is cursed with the daemon blood.

Converse: You fool this will only weaken me, for no disease or poison can kill me. In fact nothing can kill me.

Converse then fell to the ground laughing.

Back in the town.

Kathy: Wait, this can’t be. Durlid is dead.

Kyle: What this can’t be. I was supposed to get my revenge. I was supposed to be the one to kill him. Damm.

Kyle punched his hand into the ground.

Kyle then grabbed Eliza and put her on his back, they began to walk away from the town. The rest of his group followed him quietly. They felt nothing but hollow.


Chapter 12
Nightmares

Eliza: Thanks

Kab: Ehh… No problem.

Eliza had just finished drinking his blood. Kab fell on the ground due to blood lose.

Kathy: Even you will feel weaken after having your blood suck even though you are resistant to it.

Kab: Kathy is there anything you can do about my nightmares. That god dam dragon cursed me. Now I can’t even sleep what so ever.

Kathy: Eliza how do you feel?

Eliza: Weak.

Kathy: That is normal. Now go see Kyle he is waiting for you outside.

Eliza: But won’t I burn up?

Kathy: Not for another two weeks since Kab blood is in you making you some what human but at the cost of your vampire powers. After your two weeks are up you will turn back into a vampire.

Eliza: Thank you.

Eliza then went outside. Kathy then looks back at Kab who was already asleep.

Kathy: Alright let’s get this started.

Kathy said several odd words then about 30 minutes later she then appeared in Kab dream. Kab was wearing red dragon amour made out of a fully grown dragon skin and blood. His sword and shield were just like his amour. Kab eyes were different. The white of his eye was black and the iris of his eye was white. Then a black dragon appeared.

Kathy: Something is wrong here. This is not a normal curse of a dragon.

Kab charged at the dragon. His speed was twice as fast as Trin who was the fastest among them. Kab jump in the air and swung his sword at the dragon. Suddenly the tail block the attack then suddenly he was completely covered in fire. Kab got up as if nothing happened.

Kathy: There is no way he could have survived an attack like that. Only dragons are able to survive attacks like that. Even with his amour he could have still be killed.

Kab then jump into the air.

Kab: Black Flame Lighting.

Suddenly out of his sword come out a huge black flame that was headed right towards the dragon. The dragon then flap it wings sending itself 50 feet into the air. Then the flames turned into two black lighting bolts and went straight for the dragon. The dragon used it wings to reflect the lighting right back at Kab. Kab was hit by his own attack.

Female Voice: It’s not too late.

Kathy: What was that? I must end this curse now.

Kathy began to chant some strange words then suddenly she stop when she saw what Kab was doing. Kab skin had turned into that of a red dragon’s skin. His left hand had been replaced but a dragon head. He grew dragon wings on his back.

Kathy: What is going on?

Kab then appeared behind the dragon. The dragon head then feel off. Then Kab fell on the ground. His heart was gone. This entire heart and everything that was close to it was gone. Kab began to fell on the ground. Kathy then finish chanting the strange words but the nightmare didn’t stop.

Kathy: What going on?

Suddenly Kathy was completely surrounded in darkness.

Female Voice: I won’t let you interfere with my plans. You are going to die.

Kathy: Show yourself.

Suddenly Kathy fell on the ground. Her left shoulder began to bleed. Kathy then opens her eyes.

Kathy: What happened?

Kab: You were asleep. I though you were going to get rid of my nightmares?

Kathy: I tired but something is not right. I think you have been cursed by a Devil.

Kab: A devil why would a devil curse me?

Kathy: She has some sort of plan with you.

Kab: So I have been cursed by the 2nd devil.

Kathy: Yet none of this makes any sense. Devils often use hope to bring people on their sides? Yet it is extremely rare for a devil to choose one person. They often choose a group or usually an entire town.

Kab: After we get our revenge we can deal with it.

Kathy: You sure?

Kab: Ya, I’m sure.

Just outside of the town. Two dagger clash.

Kyle: Is that all you got?

Eliza: This isn’t over yet.

Eliza charged at Kyle then suddenly Kyle appeared right beside her. Eliza couldn’t breathe. Kyle had punch her so strong that all the air was knock out of her.

Kyle: We have a long way to go before you can take me on.

Eliza: Just give it some time. I will get stronger.

Trin: Unfortunately time is something that we don’t have.

Kyle: What do you mean?

Trin: We must move against my prince. He makes his move now. It is the time to strike.

Rick: Where is he?

Trin: His location is in the land of hills with the vast sea near the north.

Eliza: You mean in Capilne?

Trin: Indeed.

Eliza: Wait that land is ruled by both humans and elves.

Rick: Trin is actually a half human and half elf.

Kab: Let’s go then.

Rick look back and saw Kab and Kathy walking towards them.

Trin: We must move now.


Chapter 13
Axle the Redeemer

A man entered the town of Capilne. The man had black hair, his eyes were pure red. There was no iris or pupil. It was just the colour of blood in his eyes. He was wearing a long dark jacket. An a few Orcs in the town saw him and decided to surround the man. They took out there axes and began to talk.

Orc: Geve us all youl monei.

The man said nothing. The Orcs charged at him but suddenly one of the Orcs fell on the ground. The man had appeared right in front of the Orc with his fist in the Orc gut. The Orc fell on the ground. The other Orcs grab there comrade and walk away. The humans ran into there houses. The Elf’s carefully watch the man.

Elf: There no way that guy can be human he defeated an Orc unharmed with one hit.

Elf 2: Maybe he’s a half vampire?

Elf: Not even a half vampire could do that.

The man continued to walk down. He saw several kids playing. The man smiled.

Man: They have well. Only if I could have what they have.

The man walked into a bar. He order there strongest drink. The effects of the drink got him a little tipsy. Humans had gotten happy when drinking this but it had little effect on him. He walks out of the bar. He then saw something, a vision. He saw the castle in flames.

Man: “Looks like justice is finally coming. I must help them.”

Suddenly two black bats like wings come out of the man back and he flew away.

Trin: That is the city entrance. It won’t be able…

Suddenly a person who was wearing a black clothes and blacks wings landed right in front of them.

Rick: What are you and what do you want?

Man: My name is Axel. I have come to join you.

Kathy: You may be able to fool the others but you can’t fool me. You power is pretty good to hide your power. Even I was barely able to detect it but you are pure evil. You power comes from hell itself.

Axel: It’s true my power does come from hell itself but I am not pure evil. Let me help you.

Rick: Why should we trust you? Why don’t we just kill you right here.

Axle: You can but you will have a hard time defeating me. Yet hear me out.

Kab: Fine.

Axle: My name is Axle. I am the son of the 3rd devil. He raped my mother and she died giving birth to me. I blame my father for this but I try to do good and hope to redeem myself and send my father to hell forever. I wish to become human.

Trin: How will you do that when he will return in 500 years?

Axle: After killing him I will summon the 4 horse men’s.

Kab: Are you insane? You’ll kill us all.

Axle: It is only a matter of time before they are natural summon. I do these to stop humanity from turning to darkness. I see the creatures of god turning there backs on him and serving the devil. Satan may be wrong now but in the future he will be right.

Kathy: What will you do in the mean time?

Axle: I will do as much good as I can and send all the spawns of hell back to where they came from.

Rick: So what do you want from us.

Axle: The king here is an evil one. I wish to help you guys out defeat him.

Trin: Do you know a way in the city?

Axle: Usually I just fly above the wall. I believe I could fly you guys in one by one.

Kab: Can’t you just kill the guard.

Axle: I will not kill a human who hasn’t fully turned away from god.

Kab: You are too soft. You will never survive in this world.

Axle: That rule only applies to humans not half fallen celestials like me. Unlike you humans I don’t need food, water or money. Well actually I do need to eat once a year but I can just create the food and water. Now let’s get this started.

Axel grabs Kab and flies him over the wall. He then grabs Rick followed by Kathy, Trin then Katherine. When he touched Eliza he was shock. She was a vampire. One of the devils creatures. Axel then drew his black claymore.

Kyle: It’s ok. She’s with us. She is my sister. Turned into a vampire against her own will. He are treating her.

Axel then grabbed both of them at once and flew over the wall and landed. Then there was a large roar. Suddenly a large group of orcs surrounded them.

Axel: Dammit. I was hoping not to fight anyone before we reach the king.


Chapter 14
Fallen from Grace

Kab: I never did like Orcs.

Dark Voice: Kill them all.

A dark figure leaves and all the Orcs charge at them.

Kathy: Fools. Attacking a Wizard in a large group. I’ll kill you all with one attack. Dragon of the Fire!

Suddenly four dragon heads made out of fire came behind Kathy and charged at the Orcs. All that was left were ashes.

Kab: That’s one scary attack. I can’t wait to learn that attack.

Kathy: You still have a long way to go.

Kab: Yet I have come a long way.

Axel: A Demi-God Wizard. Very impressive. There are few who have come that far.

Kathy: I plan to go on farther.

Axel: It will not be easy but we must move now.

They headed towards the gate of the castle. There were several humans guarding it.

Axel: I’ll take care of them

Kab: I though you weren’t going to kill humans?

Axel: Who said anything about killing them? Justice of the Divine!

Suddenly all the humans near the gate fell down.

Kathy: Very impressive. Managing to take them all out with no chance to dodge or even counter. Also it didn’t even hurt them.

Axel let us go. Axel stabs his sword in the gate and suddenly a red energy goes around the entire gate. Suddenly it blew up pushing them all away. There were some human and Orcs guards.

Axel: IF WE MADE THIS FAR WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU GUYS HAVE A CHANCE OF BEATING US.

The humans ran away. The Orcs on the other hands like the challenged. They quickly charged at them.

Trin: Pain Killer!

Suddenly Trin moved twice as fast as she usually did. She quickly killed the Orcs one by One. She disappeared and reappeared with several Orcs head falling off. The remaining Orcs ran with fear.

Rick: Carefully when using that. That attack allows you to move twice as fast without feeling pain but it takes up a lot of energy.

They entered the Castle and entered the throne room.

Dark King: Trin have you finally returned to die?

Trin: I’m going to kill you and make you’re head my trophy.

Dark King: You’re going to have a hard time doing that.

Axel: Carefully I’m not sure if he is human. He has some kind of demonic and celestial energy.

Rick: How can one person have both types energy? They two of them destroy each other.

Axel: Yes that is true unless one is switching paths. Yet all I sense is revenge and hatred in his heart.

Dark King: Ah a fallen half demon. How pathetic you actually think you can redeem yourself. You shall rot in hell for all eternity. Now come out my loyal servant.

Suddenly a black creature appeared. It look exactly like an elf expect black.

Dark King: Even the elves have fallen to my power. I have tainted them and turned them into evil. There powers are pretty deadly. Like normal elves they are good at magic but these elves are also make good assassins.

Trin began to get angry. She charged at the king. Just as she was about to stab him with her katars a large sword block it.

Dark Elf: You’ll need more then that to kill my lord.

The Dark Elf began to laugh. Trin tried to cut his head off but he simply duck and swung his sword at Trin. Trin put her two katars in the way. She was push back several feet. She charged at the Dark Elf. Then suddenly her blades turned yellow. The Dark Elf block the attack but he was push several feet back.

Dark Elf: Dammit. She is combining her holy and human powers together. This gives her the upper…

Eliza: Sorry I couldn’t help it. I decided to choose an enemy.

Eliza was biting the Dark Elf neck. She was sucking the blood out of him.

Eliza: I’ll take care of this Dark Elf while you go after the Dark King.

The Dark Elf elbowed Eliza in the chest. Causing her to let go of him. The Dark Elf grabbed his sword and swung it at Eliza. Eliza jump back but part of her face was cut off. Yet within a few seconds it regenerated.

Eliza: Do you think you can kill a vampire so easily?

Eliza charged at the Dark Elf. The Dark Elf stabbed her in the stomach. Yet this was part of her plan. She used one of her daggers to pin his and against the wall. Then she pinned the Dark Elf other hand against the wall. She then began to drink the Dark Elf blood until he had no more. The Dark Elf fell on the floor.

Eliza: That was so…

Eliza fell and Kyle grabbed her. He had knocked her out with the handle of his sword. It hurt him more then it did to Eliza.

Kyle: Sorry.

Trin charged at the Dark King. Her katar went right through his head. Yet nothing happened.

Dark King: You think you weapons can kill me?

Dark King then put his hand right through her chest. Then she felt something. There was something touching her heart.

Axel: So that’s what you are. You are a ghost. Not a normal one. A strong one. You can actually take your human form.

Dark King: Well done. You figured it out. For that you get to watch this girl die.

Suddenly Trin felt her heart get crush. She fell on her knees.

Axel: No.

Axel flew to her. His wings changed from a demonic bat like to a celestial angel wing. His clothes turned white. He began to heal Trin. Her wounds fully healed.

Dark King: No this is impossible. How can you heal her? How can you deny the darkness in your heart?

Axel: When I healed her I saw everything you did to her. Now I will finally gave her peace.

Out of Axel chest came a white beam which hit the Dark King.

Dark King: What’s going on? I can’t enter my ghost mode.

Trin got up and cut his head off.

Trin: Thanks you.

Axel then turned back into his old self.

Axel: No thank you. Thanks you I am now one step closer to seeking redemption. I hope that one day I can repay you.

Suddenly a white light appeared and then it left and they found themselves out side the city.

Axel: I must go now. I hope we meet again.

Trin: I look forward to it.

Axel then spread his wings out. He flew off into the distance.


Chapter 15
Together We Challenge a God

Kathy began to fall on the ground and yell in pain.

Rick: What’s wrong?

Kathy: He is near. He is trying to summon a dragon.

Kab: What if he summons a dragon he will become nearly unbeatable.

Suddenly a grey light surrounded them they found themselves in a mountain with trees and a river.

???: Hi there. I have summoned all of you here to fight a great evil.

It was a man holding a large sword. Behind him was the demi vampire that Kab fought when they were at the werewolf village.

Rick: What is the meaning of this?

Alex 2nd: I am Alex the 2nd. I have summoned you to fight the evil god wizard.

Kathy: Impossible. He still isn’t that strong. He still hasn’t been able to summon a dragon.

Alex 2nd: True but he has created his own world. People worship him as a god. I know you want to kill him and I will allow you the killing blow.

Kab: I have a bad feeling about this.

Kathy: I agree to your terms.

Alex 2nd: Then let’s get this started.

Alex 2nd sword started to glow into a silver colour.

Suddenly they were at a tower. They tower itself was 100 feet high.

Kab: Ah ****.

Alex 2nd: That’s right we have to climb the top of the tower of twilight.

Kathy: It’s going to be on long walk.

Elsewhere in a mountain.

6th Angel: Die you demon.

Converse: A battle between two immortals. Thing is that if I do enough damage to you I can send you to heaven for 500 years.

6th Angel suddenly appeared behind Converse.

Converse head began to fall off but suddenly it regenerated.

Converse: I told you I’m Immortal. It’s all thanks to your own God. Thanks to him I can’t be slayed.

6th Angel: I see. This is why I can’t kill you because you are pure blood vampire and you have drank the exiler. Meaning you can regenerator much faster then you usually could and you are also immune to all the vampire weakness. Meaning you can’t be killed.

Converse: I also gained another power on top of that. Lucky for you since you’re an angel you aren’t affected by it.

6th Angel: Then I shall seal you away forever. Gates of Hell!

Suddenly a Gate appeared and several chains appeared and grabbed Converse.

Converse: This can’t stop me.

Suddenly Converse turned into 100 of bats and disappeared.

6th Angel: Next time you won’t be so lucky.

Back at the tower where Kab and the others where climbing.

Kab: Final we reach the top.

They entered the door. Suddenly they were in a platform in the sky. The roof was gone and the platform was 100 feet long.

A voice from all directions: So you have finally come into my world. Now you shall feel the wraith of GOD!

Kathy: You’re not a God Mirigane.

Mirigane: I’m glad you still remember my name and it will the last name you will know.

Kathy: Show your self coward.

Mirigane: Do not call you’re God a coward you demon.

Kab: What the hell?

Suddenly everyone look like a demon.

Mirigane: “You’re in my world now. Meaning I am truly God.”

Kab (Demonic Voice): I’m going to tear you part.

Mirigane: “Those who defy god will have the sun itself attack you. Its wrath will burn greater then hell. You shall die with what gives you life and hope. Sun strike down those who defy you.

Suddenly from the sun a huge light beam came. Everyone ran out of the way expect Alex 2nd. He stood his ground and put his sword in the way between the light beam and himself. There was a huge flash. Alex 2nd was still standing. Yet there was silver on his face as if he was being infected.

Mirigane: “How can one survive such an attack? Wait your sword. It like it’s alive but it doesn’t have a soul yet it contains a high power. Is that sword Excalibur?

Alex 2nd: No it’s not. It’s a sword far greater then Excalibur.

Mirigane: Lair there is no such sword stronger then Excalibur. Now die Demon.

Katoru: “I call upon God himself. Give me the power to decided judgment on this person who claims to be you and let me take down this false God.”

Mirigane: “Dumb half vampire only a human… What?”

Katoru suddenly got a gold glow.

Mirigane: “How can a half vampire use a power only available to a Bishop? It does not matter for you cannot defeat me. God is my shield. As long as I put my fate in him I will not fall.

Katoru suddenly jump at Mirigane and took out his sword. He swung it but only hit something hard but his sword went right through it and he felt his sword cutting flesh and blood.

Mirigane: Impossible. How did he break my barrier? He is a half vampire.

Alex 2nd: I restored his human powers and I gave him elf’s powers to.

Mirigane: What? Impossible!

Mirigane: When god himself cannot do the tasks required then he steps in. He is the one who defy god and is the source of the darkness. I call upon Lucifer himself to vanquish my enemies at the cost of my soul.

Suddenly a black spear went through Mirigane chest. He looked like he had died.

Mirigane: You have my soul Lucifer now take there souls and bodies.

Suddenly a hand dark hand came out of the earth and started to grab everyone.

Kathy: If it costs my own life let it be. Stop this person who has sold his soul to the traitor. I give myself up so that you can give judgment on him. Let him not hurt another person or cause any more pain or sorrow. Let him be judge by Satan himself one of the Heaven Judges.

Kab: Let your power go through my body. I shall be host for this judgement.

Mirigane: “You are actually willing to sacrifice yourself to kill me and you sword wizard are you actually willing to give up the ability to even move just to kill me?

Kathy and Kab: We are, now feel the judgment of Satan, Heaven and God himself.

Suddenly a gate opened up and several chains grabbed Mirigane. Mirigane fought the chains. He was actually resisting them.

Kathy: It’s not going to be enough. Were going to need something to weaken him so the gate can take him to hell. Feel the wraith of you power. You have killed over 1000 people now feel there pain. The pain of death!

Suddenly 1000 sprits grabbed Mirigane and began to drag him to hell.

Mirigane: “No, this cannot be! I am god! I cannot be defeated.”

The gate completely consumed Mirigane.

Kathy fell on the floor. She was dead. Kab also fell on the floor he could no longer feel his body.

Alex 2nd: Do not worry. I can heal them. By the power in this sword and my bloodline that I have inherited restore them, to let them finish there journey.

Kathy and Kab both got up.

Alex 2nd: Well done this dark wizard is gone. Now we can all continue our journey.

Alex 2nd and Katoru both began to walk away.

Kab: “Guys just one question where are we?”

Everyone look around. They realize they were lost.


Chapter 16
The End Is Only the Beginning

A week passed by since the battle between Kathy and Mirigane. They had been resting and looking for the last enemy. The most powerfully one out of them all. The red dragon that’d killed off Kab family. Kab was standing on a mountain. He was looking into the clouds during the sunset. His favorite time of day but it would be the last he would enjoy while he was still alive. Suddenly Eliza appeared.

Eliza: I can see why you like the sunset. All the colours.

Kab: Yes it is truly wonderfully.

Eliza: Kab I just want to thank you for everything you have done for me.

Kab: What?

Eliza: If it wasn’t for you I would still be a mindless vampire sucking blood but now I have a chance to become human thanks to you. So thank you.

Kab: Oh, you’re welcomed.

Eliza then kisses Kab.

Kab: What was that for?

Eliza walked away. Kab wondered what had happened. He had sent his whole life on revenge he never had time to socialize with other people.

Kab: There you are.

Rick: Who there?

Rick had just walk up the hill were Kab was standing.

Kab: I found the dragon that killed my family. I will have my revenge.

Rick: Then let’s get this over with.

They walk for a day until they reach a mountain. They decided to rest for a while.

They were all gathered at a fire. Suddenly a man appeared.

Man: What are you people doing here in my home?

Rick: Oh were so…

Kab charged at the man and swung his sword but the man had already jumped 40 feet in the air.

Kab: “It’s been 15 long years. I’m finally going to kill you.”

Suddenly the man turned into a red dragon.

Dragon: You have lived all these years in misery and suffering. Now you have come back to kill me and to avenge you family and friends but you will only fail and find death and sorrow. Why don’t you just give up?

Kab: I my suffering end today.

Dragon: Do you actually think by killing me all your angry and hatred will leave. Now you will want more and you will keep killing. You will turn into another version of me. You will only become what you hate most.

Kab: Will see about that.

Dragon: So be it but you will find nothing but misery here.

Kab jumps at the dragon trying to slice it in half.

Dragon: Fool.

Suddenly a red fireball hits Kab.

Eliza: No!

Kab appeared out of the fireball still headed towards the dragon.

Dragon: Impressive but not good enough.

The dragon suddenly appeared behind Kab.

Kab: What? How?

Dragon: Now die.

Kathy: Rise from the ashes. You are the immortal beast that can even defeat a dragon. You laugh at death since it only makes you stronger. You’re ashes will rise from you’re ashes stronger then ever. Take down my enemy. Phoenix flames.

Dragon was suddenly engulfed with flames. Suddenly it spread out it wings and the flames were gone.

Dragon: “How dare attack me with that attack. I shall …”

Suddenly the dragon felt a sharp pain in its chest.

Kab: You let you’re guard down.

Dragon: Fool my blood is strong enough to kill you.

Kab: Will see about that.

The dragon flaps its wings trying crushing Kab but Kab managed to jump out of the way just in time but fell to the ground. Then was a snap sound.

Kab: **** my leg is broken.

Eliza: I fight in your place while Kathy heals you.

Dragon: You filthy vampires are the creations of the devils. Before there arrivals we dragons were the most powerfully creatures but then they came and took away our title.

Eliza: Now feel my wraith.

Eliza jump towards the dragon.

Dragon: Die!

He shot a fireball at Eliza. Eliza body was completely destroyed by the fireball. Her body began to regenerate.

Dragon: Damm vampires. There so annoying to kill.

Eliza tried to stab the dragon but the dragon simply moved it head and bite Eliza.

Eliza: Now die.

She stabs the dragon right in the eye.

Dragon: Die you *****.

He suddenly crushes her entire body destroying her bones. She was dead.

Kab and Rick: No.

Kab and Rick both jump at the dragon. Kathy had just finished healing Kab. She was also casting another spell.

Kab jump after the dragon. As did Kyle. Suddenly Kab felt a pain in his chest. The dragon had stabbed him with its tail. Kyle took this opportunity to slice the dragon twice on the neck.

Dragon: You will pay for that.

Kyle was falling back to the ground when suddenly he was hit by a fireball. There was nothing left but some corpse.

Rick, Trin and Katherine: Die!

All three of them jump after the dragon.

Dragon: Die fools.

The Dragon suddenly swung it head breathing out flames. Rick, Trin and Katherine were all caught within the flames. They each made to the dragon. Trin and Katherine had managed to cut off the wings and Rick had stabbed it in the neck. Yet the burns were too much. They fell to the ground. The dragon was now also falling to the ground. Since its wings were cut off. As it feel to the ground it shot three fire balls each hitting Rick, Trin and Katherine killing them all.

Kathy: Celestial.

Dragon: What was that spell supposes to do.

Kathy: With that spell it will now give Kab the power to kill you. I summon the oceans. Show this creature of air who has always defied you your wraith.

Suddenly a tidal wave appeared out of now where and hit the dragon. The dragon jump out and shot a fireball at Kathy but she put up a shield and which block it but the shield itself was destroyed. Suddenly another fireball hit Kathy killing her. Kab saw this as he was getting up.

Kab: “Not again. You have taken everything from me again. Die you bastard.”

Kab suddenly jumps at the dragon with tremendous speed.

Dragon: Were did he suddenly get this speed from?

The dragon shot a fire ball. Kab managed to dodge most of it but a bit hit his face. His wounds started to heal quickly. He then appeared behind the dragon. The left bottom part of his stomach was missing. The dragon had bitten it off. Then the dragon head came off. Kab had done it. He had killed the dragon. Kab fell on the floor were his heart was punctured by a silver rock.

End of Season 1


Bonus Chapter
To fall from Heaven and Hell

Before the time that Lucifer fell into hell there were two angels who fell in love with each other. They would spend all there time together. They would always agree on everything and would always be happy. This would not last. One day Lucifer rebelled against god and tried to defeat him. Some angels agreed with him. The female angel joined Lucifer while the male angel chose to stay on the side of God. After Lucifer was banished all the angel who joined him was also banish to hell. This separated the male angel from the female angel.

Several months pass by. Each day the male angel could only keep thinking about his love that had fallen with Lucifer. He was always wondering why she had joined him. Satan discovered this and tried to convince the angel that she was gone and he would no longer see her again. He told him that it would be best to move on and if he was every to see her again that he would pass judgment on her. The male angel suddenly attacked Satan but Satan was far too strong and defeated the male angel. The male angel was not banished and god forgave him. Yet Satan continued to try to convince God that the male angel also was starting to fall. God dismiss Satan warning and told him that it was not up to them.

One day the angel snuck out of Heaven. He went to hell to search for his long lost love. Along the way he fought and slayed demons who tried to stop him. He then found his long lost love but when she saw him she attack him. The male angel not willing to hurt his love allowed her to defeat him. He was then imprisoned in hell were his former love tortured him. Each day he would try to convince her to return to heaven and ask god for forgiveness. After a year he managed to convince his former love to return to heaven. She released him and with there combined power of both good and evil they managed to escape hell. When they returned to heaven Satan was furious. He demanded they both be sent to hell. God could not ignore what the two angels had done but the fact that they admitted that they were wrong could also not be ignored so he decided to send them to purgatory. There they would share the same cross each one on one side for all of time as Satan demanded. They also were not longer considered angels or devils but fallen angels.

They spent three years even though the pain was worse then hell they were together and that made them happy. Then after three long years a fallen angel showed up but this fallen angel was different from them. She had perfectly master both the way of the light and the darkness. She managed to free the two fallen angels and told them that she was actually an AngelDevil who was an angel who had perfectly balance the path of both light and darkness. She then lead the two fallen angels to earth where the living were. The two fallen angels lived in peace but as a result of being on earth there powers and vast knowledge was restrained yet they were no longer in pain and were with each other. While the female look things from a dark and evil perspective the male look at things from a light and good perspective yet in the end they would also agree and be happy.
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Bonus Chapter 2
Lucifer Vs Satan

When God created the Angels he made each of them different. No two angels were the same. Each one was different in there own way. Out of all the Angels there were three angels who were far stronger then the other angels that god had created. There names were Gabriel, Lucifer and Satan. With them God lived a very peacefully life for a long time. They entered a golden age but it was not to last. God wanted to test his angels. So he created humans who could surpass the angels. When Lucifer heard this he became furious. He wondered why God had done this. Lucifer started a rebellion against God in order to wipe out all of humanity.

Lucifer: “God has forgotten us. He wants us to be servants for those pathetic humans. I say no. I say no to his will. I say we make those humans our servants. Together if we combine our power he can defeat God and undo his mistakes. He will undo the wrong that he has done on us. Join me brothers and sisters.”

One fourth of the angels decided to join Lucifer. Lucifer then decided to make his move and he and his army of angels made there way into the inner circle. Then Satan appeared in their way.

Satan: “Humans may be pathetic but that is no reason to go against god and his divine will. You must be a fool to think you could possible defeat our maker. He gave you life and this is how you repay him.”

Lucifer: “Get out of my way and I shall show you who the real God is.”

Satan: “You actually think yourself greater then God? You truly are a fool. I shall cast judgment on you.

Both Lucifer and Satan began to charge at each other. Satan swung his sword of Judgment. Lucifer took out his spear of Eternally Light and block Satan attack. They were both push away from the attack. They both look at each other. Both determined to win. Each unwilling to give up or back down.

Satan: “Judgment!”
Lucifer: “All of Light Reverse!”

Satan swung his sword which releases a huge semi curved circle energy attack. Lucifer swung his spear which releases an attack as bright as the sun itself. Then it suddenly turned black. The two attacks cancelled each other out. Satan then suddenly appeared right in front of Lucifer and slashed him across the chest.

Lucifer: “Damn you.”

Satan: “You are the one who is damned.”

Lucifer aimed for Satan heart with his spear but Satan managed to deflect the attack with his sword. Lucifer twisted his spear to block Satan counter attack. Satan swung his sword but Lucifer dodged it. Lucifer then tried to lance Satan but Satan dodged it and stab Lucifer right in his shoulder. Yet this was all part of Lucifer plan. Satan suddenly felt a sudden pain in his heart. Lucifer had stabbed him with his bear hands. His arm had gone completely through Satan heart. Satan fell on the ground where he black out unable to fight anymore. Lucifer stood victories and with that more angels joined his cause. He had now convinced a third of the angels to join him.

Lucifer: “It’s a shame Angels can’t be killed.”

Lucifer’s wounds had already fully healed from Satan attack.

Then Gabriel flew down near Satan.

Gabriel: “So not only have you betrayed God but you also have attack your own brothers to. You truly have fallen.”

Lucifer: “We may have been created by the same person but my only brothers and sisters are the ones who follow me and understand what must be done.”

Gabriel: “If that is your choice so be it.”

They both charged at each other just as Satan had charged at Lucifer before. Gabriel took out his Staff of the Messenger. When there two attacks hit each other there was a sudden flash of light. Lucifer was push back 20 feet. Gabriel appeared in front of Lucifer. What happened next shock everyone watching. Both Lucifer and Gabriel had stabbed each other in the heart. Suddenly a voice spoke.

Voice: “Return.”

Gabriel, Lucifer and Satan all got back up with all there wounds healed instantly.

Voice: “You have gone against me who has given you life. If you acknowledge that you were wrong and to end this I will forgive you and let you stay here.”

Lucifer: “NEVER!”

Voice: “Until then you and those who have followed you will spend the rest of time in hell until.

Suddenly a large flame appeared and grabbed Lucifer and all his followers.

Lucifer: “I shall bring every human to hell. Not a single one will enter heaven.”

Those were the last word said by Lucifer before he was finally cast down to hell.

Satan: “He was right about one thing. Not a single human will ever enter Heaven.”

Gabriel: “No most humans will enter Heaven.”

Satan: “We shall see.”

[Necrosis]

I decided to make a new post since its a new season.

Chapter 17
Ashes


Orc Warrior: AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRHHH!

The Orc Warrior swung his might battle axe and cut the human head off. Hundreds of Orcs and Humans were fighting. They clash together, killing hundreds. There was bloodshed everywhere. Where ever one looked they could only see death and killing. There was an Orc Lord who was killing every human who came near him. He swung his gaint might two handed battle axe of execution. Five human heads feel off at once. There bodies hit the floor lifeless. The blood spilled out of there necks. The Orc Lord laugh. There was no one who could challenge him and defeat him. He stood on top of a hill made out of human bodies that he himself had killed personally. Suddenly there was a red flash and the entire Human and Orc front line had been destroyed by a single unknowed attack.

Dark Voice: Kill. Kill. KILL!

It was some kind of bizarre creature that they had never seen before. It looked like a half human and a half dragon. His body was like a human but he had two dragon wings that came out of his back. He also had a dragon tail and his left hand had been replaced with a dragon head and neck. His skin colour matched that of a red dragon. It was as if he was some kind of dragon hybrid.

Dragon Hybrid: Die!

An Orc warrior charged at the dragon hybrid but the Orc warrior suddenly felt a sharp pain around his head. The dragon hybrid had used his left hand to bite the Orc warrior head. Dragon Hybrid began to apply pressure. The Orc Warrior began to scream out in pain. Suddenly the Orc Warrior head exploded. The Orc let out one last cry before he died. It completely destroyed the morale of everyone who had heard it. All the humans and Orcs charged at the Dragon Hybrid hoping to kill it. They put aside there difference and joined together to deal a killing blow to the Dragon Hybrid.

Dragon Hybrid: Fools. Now DIE!

There was a huge flame that purged the entire battle field of all the Orcs and Humans who were fighting. There was nothing left but corpses and ashes. The Dragon Hybrid began to walk away from the battlefield.

Elsewhere just outside of a forest stood Alex the 2nd and Katoru.

Alex 2nd: We better get moving. I want to get to the village before the sun sets.

Katoru: Why are we even headed to this village. They are at war with the Orcs. What good will it do us?

Alex 2nd: That’s the point. They are at war with the Orcs. I hope to unite the Orcs and the humans together under my command. With there help I can start recruiting many more people. I can finally start my crusade and get rid of the power that feeds the darkness.

They made their way to the city but when they arrived their, it was completely destroyed. There was nothing left but a few brunt down building and some brunt corpse. It was as if a meteor had hit the city. The ground was black and the sky was covered in smoke.

Katoru: The Orcs must have done this but how could they do so much damage?

Alex 2nd: I don’t know but I was hoping that the humans would hold up for a little longer but looks like that didn’t happen.

Katoru: We should still go to the Orc village. We still might be able to recruit the Orcs there to join our side.

Alex 2nd: Then it is best if we move now. I have a bad feeling about this. Something is wrong.

They began to make their way to the Orc city but before they reach it they found a battlefield that also looked like it had been hit by a meteor. There were dead bodies every where. Orcs and humans both brunt all the way to the bones. Nothing left but some ashes and bones. Suddenly something began to stand up. It was an Orc Lord who was using his might two handed battle axe of execution as a walking to stick. The Orc began to make his way to Alex and Katoru. Alex 2nd ran towards him. He helped out the Orc.

Alex 2nd: What happened here?

Orc Lord: We were attacking the humans. It was a great fight and an honorable one to. Then suddenly all that changed. A dragon hybrid appeared and killed all my men and all the humans. Even when we united against him he still easily defeated us. It was like his power was even greater then a dragon. After he killed everyone he headed towards the human village. He probably already killed everyone there. Yet I fear he is now headed towards my village. We Orcs may be savages but we do have honor. I know you are a great and a very honorable warrior. Kill him to restore my… honor.

The Orc Lord died.

Katoru: “We should at least bury him.”

Alex 2nd: “It’s the least we can do for me.”

They began to dig a hole. They used the shields of the warriors who died to dig the hole. The put the dead body of the might Orc Lord in it. They then buried the body and put his might two handed battle axe of execution on top of his grave as a tomb stone.

Alex 2nd: “Let’s go and kill this dragon hybrid that kills for no reason. He is a creature of chaos. Worse then evil. We must end him.

They made their way to the village but when they arrived there it was already being brunt down. The might Orc city was completely destroyed. There was one Orc running away. Suddenly the Dragon Hybrid appeared in front of the Orc. The Orc look scared, as if he was seeing the angel of death. It was extremely rare for an Orc to be scared. It was said that Orcs would laugh at the face of death yet this was not the case here. The Dragon Hybrid left hand grabbed the Orc neck biting it. The Orc neck suddenly snapped and his head was severed from his body. The blood ran down the dragon hybrid arm which the blood colour match perfectly the colour of the Dragon Hybrid.

Katoru: Die!

Katoru ran towards the Dragon Hybrid and swung his sword at the monster. Yet his attack was suddenly stopped. The dragon hybrid had bitten Katoru sword with his left hand. The Sword began to crack. Katoru tried to bit the Dragon Hybrid. Yet Katoru felt a sudden pain in his neck. The dragon hybrid had grabbed his neck with his right hand.

Katoru: ****.

The Dragon Hybrid started to squeeze harder. Not letting any air enter Katoru lungs. Suddenly there was a silver flash and both of the dragon hand fell off.

Alex 2nd: This guy is strong.

The Dragon Hybrid arms were starting to regenerate. Its two hands regrew almost instantly. It was like nothing they had seen before.

Alex 2nd: I cut off his hands with my sword. It would take a half celestial being (celestial being is an angel or a devil or something created directly by god in heaven) to power to regenerate quickly after my attack.

Katoru saw one of the hands of the dragon hybrid that Alex 2nd cut off. What he did next he hated but he had no choice. He began to suck the blood of the hand that had been severed.

Katoru: No, this can’t be.

Alex 2nd: What is it?

Katoru: Half the blood seems to be dragon like but the other half is Kab blood.

Alex 2nd: What? How the hell did Kab turn into that?

Katoru: I don’t know but his blood really tastes good, very good, it addictive.

Alex 2nd: Snap out of it.

Suddenly Kab opened up his dragon hand mouth from his left hand and shot out a huge flame. The smoke cleared and there was a silver barrier protecting both Katoru and Alex 2nd.

Alex 2nd: Right now we’re not ready to fight him. Well need to retreat for now.

Katoru: Understood.

Kab speared his wings out and charged at Alex 2nd and Katoru but there was silver light and Kab went right through them. There was nothing left. Kab looked at the sky. There was nothing left for him to kill. He flew up into the sky headed south.
Back at the human village stood ten knights of the light. Each trained by the 1st Angel.

1st Knight: He was here.

2nd Knight (female): Something different about him.

3rd Knight (elf): He has entered some kind of transformation.

4th knight (female elf): It doesn’t matter we will still capture him.

[Jollydevil6]

The storyline is good, but it is more for the younger-ish reader...if this were to be read by older audiences, then you should add some figurative language to enhance your writing (including similes, metaphors, personifications, Imagery, and alliteration) These skills would improve the flow to your writing and better describe the enviroment/situation of the plot. Also, you may want to vary your sentence begginings and add complex senteces in (Ex. your sentence - "Katoru ran towards the Dragon Hybrid and swung his sword at the monster. Yet his attack was suddenly stopped. The dragon hybrid had bitten Katoru sword with his left hand." uses waaay to many sentences to say that, Improvement - "The pounding of his boots against the pavement rang out like a siren piercing through the air as Katoru sprinted towards the Dragon hybrid, sword in hand ready to strike, only to have the blade stopped by the menacing jaws of the dragon's left hand"...) If you aren't in highschool yet then ignore all that I have said or if you are simply writing for fun and don't plan on being a writer

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The storyline is good, but it is more for the younger-ish reader...if this were to be read by older audiences, then you should add some figurative language to enhance your writing (including similes, metaphors, personifications, Imagery, and alliteration) These skills would improve the flow to your writing and better describe the enviroment/situation of the plot. Also, you may want to vary your sentence begginings and add complex senteces in (Ex. your sentence - "Katoru ran towards the Dragon Hybrid and swung his sword at the monster. Yet his attack was suddenly stopped. The dragon hybrid had bitten Katoru sword with his left hand." uses waaay to many sentences to say that, Improvement - "The pounding of his boots against the pavement rang out like a siren piercing through the air as Katoru sprinted towards the Dragon hybrid, sword in hand ready to strike, only to have the blade stopped by the menacing jaws of the dragon's left hand"...) If you aren't in highschool yet then ignore all that I have said or if you are simply writing for fun and don't plan on being a writer

Thanks for the tip. I also like critism (as long as it valid). Next chapter I will try out your suggestion.

[Necrosis]

Chapter 18
To Protect Those Who I Love I Must Become What I Hate


The sky was filled with smoke. The ground was fully of corpse as if the earth itself was made out of human body parts. It was as if death himself had came to this land and turned into his kingdom. There was nothing alive expect Kab, the one who had done all this. He looked around seeing nothing alive. All he saw was the result of his actions. Nothing even the plants or trees or alive. The town had provided little resistance. Yet all the killing had made him tried. He had no slept for a week now. He was to busy killing to sleep but he was getting tried. He needs to sleep now. So he got down on the ground and fell asleep.

Kab (Normal Looking): Where am I? What happened? Am I dead? All I remember is falling down on the ground.

Eliza: No, you’re not dead.

Kab turned around and saw Eliza. He kept looking around but all he saw was a brunt down tree besides Eliza.

Kab: But you’re dead, I saw you die with him eyes. The dragon killed you.

Kathy: Yes we did lose our bodies but before we died I cast a spell, one that I had learned just a few days ago. It let me transfer our souls into your body allowing us to always be with you.

Kab: Wait a second. Where are we? Something is different. I feel empty as if I’m missing something.

Kathy: You’re right. Right now you’re are dreaming and that is the only reason you can see us. You have lost control of your body.

Kab: Wait, then what happened to my body?

Kathy: Unfortunately the dragon cast a very powerfully curse on you. Even one that I cannot remove. Even with my powers now even stronger then ever before. It allowed him to send his soul into your body and take over you. It has had the secondary effect of turning your body into a dragon hybrid body.

Kab: What? How did he mange to do that?

Kathy: Before Celestials came to earth Dragons were the strongest creatures. They know many magical spells and there souls are stronger the human souls. Even with the six of us helping you out we still can’t defeat the dragon. His power is far too great.

Kab: I killed that dragon before. I can do it again. I have destroyed his body and know I will destroy his soul.

Dragon: “Is that so? You think you can actually defeat me, a red dragon? I, the one who took everything away from you, your family, your friends and even your own body, what in the world makes you think you can actually beat me?

Kab: Then it’s time for me to take it all back from you, starting with taking my body back from you.

Dragon: Then come, come and fail just like you did before and again. Every time you have failed.

Kab charged directly at the dragon yet just as he reaches it the dragon disappeared and reappeared 20 feet in the air. Kab quickly jumps after it, going in for the killing blow quickly to end this fight immediately.

Dragon: Fool, here in the air I have the advantage. Give my regards to hell you foolish human.

The dragon spat out a huge fireball as if hell itself had open a portal which was headed straight towards Kab.

Kab: ****!

The Fireball hit Kab directly. He was sent back into the ground as if he was an angel who had fallen and lost his powers.

Kab: Damn it.

Rick, Katherine, Kyle, Trin and Eliza all jump towards the Dragon, all of them working together as if they were the same person trying to achieve the same goal which was to kill the dragon.

Dragon: Fools, even if you all team up against me, you still cannot hope to defeat me. Why don’t you just give up and accept you’re faith. It would make things easier on both of us.

The Dragon swung his tail in a circular motion knocking Rick and all the other back to the ground.

Kathy: Dragocus!

Dragon: “What, impossible. Only a god wizard can summon a dragon and when we fought you weren’t a god wizard.

Kathy: When my soul entered Kab body I learned a lot about the soul. It allowed my powers to grow to such a high level that I became a god wizard.

Dragon: Lies. Now I shall…

Suddenly a Red dragon appeared above Kathy. She had done it. She had become a god wizard. She had summoned a Red Dragon.

Dragon: Looks like this won’t be as easy as I thought. Looks like you’ll each face a slow painfully death.

Kathy Dragon charged at the Red Dragon. The Red Dragon shot a fireball at Kathy Dragon. Kathy Dragon simply hit the fireball away with its tail. Kathy Dragon then bites the Red Dragon neck. The Red Dragon yelled out in pain.

Dragon: Die you fake!

The Red Dragon unleashed a huge flame which completely burned Kathy Dragon. Kathy Dragon fell to the ground. It began to get up but the Red Dragon slammed down on its body and began to bite down on its neck. Kathy dragon let out a roar and then died.

Kab: Looks like I have no choice. I really didn’t want to do this but it’s my only option right now.

Kab began to cry out in pain. His skin began to turn into a reddish colour. Two dragon like wings appeared out of his back. His eyes became red and hawk like. His right hand turned into a dragon mouth. He had transformed into a dragon hybrid.

Kab: Now I shall defeat you once and for all.

Dragon: Do you humans do nothing but talk. Why don’t you put you’re money were you mouth is?

Kab ran towards the Dragon. The dragon flew into the air again. Kab began to flap his wings and flew after the dragon. The Dragon shot a fireball at Kab but Kab did the same thing and the two fireballs cancelled each other out. The dragon opened its mouth getting ready to eat Kab alive. Kab took out his sword and swung it hoping to kill the dragon.

Kab: Damn.

Kab shoulder was bleeding. His sword fell from his hand.

Dragon: This cannot be. I lost?

The Dragon fell down to the ground. It was unable to move. Its head was almost completely split into two pieces. The only thing keeping them together was the bones in his head.

Kab: You should be dead.

Dragon: You truly are a fool. We share the same body. We die together of none of us dies. I am you and you are me. I will always be there haunting you until you die… that is if you actually do die.

Kab: At least I know I am stronger then you.

Dragon: Only due to the power I gave you.

Kab: No, I took that power away from you. Meaning that I am truly am you’re better.

Dragon: We Dragons are a proud race but we know when we are defeated. So yes you did win but the worst is still yet to come.

The Dragon let out a huge laugh then suddenly Kab woke up. Was it all a bad dream? No it was real. He could feel the power flowing from his body. He had finally regain control of his body.

Kab: What now? Where do I go now?

Kab began to fell a burning feeling. The sun was starting to rise. It was burning him.

Converse: And now you will die.


I think out of all the chapers I wrote this one was one of my wrost since I valued quanity over quality.


Chapter 19
Vampire Eidolon

Kab: What the hell is going on?

Converse: My special power is activating. You are now turning into a vampire.

Kab: What how is this possible?

Converse: Foolish human. I drank the exiler. It made me immune to all the vampire weakness. I being a pure blood as gained another advantage from it. Anyone who comes in with 100 feet of me turns into a vampire. Yet if they leave the 100 feet radius then they turn back into whatever they were. The only people who are immune to this are celestial beings and half vampires.

Kab was in the sunlight. He was burning up turning into ash but his healing powers activated. He was healing and melting at the same time. It was as if he was in hell.

Converse: Interesting. A fate worst then hell. The pain must be horrible. How does it feel? How is the pain of melting only to have new flesh take its place and melt again?

Kab suddenly jumps.

Converse: Trying to get away from me?

Kabs landed in the shade were there was no sunlight.

Converse: Ah, I see in order to stop the pain of being a vampire in the sunlight you went into the shaded. Yet that won’t save you from me.

Kab: Who are you and what do you want from me? Did Lucifer himself send you?

Converse laughed.

Converse: Lucifer, I couldn’t care less about him. I am immune to all his powers. If I meet him I would send him back to hell and take over his position.

Kab: So you’re a rouge vampire who is immortal. Let’s put that to the test.

Kab suddenly entered a transformation. His skin turned red. Two wings appeared on his back. His right hand turned into a dragon head.

Converse: A dragon hybrid. This should be interesting.

Converse was getting excited. He always loved a good fight.

Converse: I can’t wait to suck you’re blood. You know what. In fact I’ll suck all of it turning you into a vampire. As a pure blood vampire when I suck all you’re blood you turn into a vampire.

Kab: Unfortunately for you I’m a sword wizard. Meaning I can’t be turned and also if you suck my blood you will turn human for a while.

Converse: Foolish human, didn’t I tell I drank the exiler making me immune to such effects. Even being a sword wizard I can turn you into a vampire. Remember my mere presence is already strong enough to turn you into a vampire. I guess it’s true what the incubus and succubus say humans are fools that can be easily fooled.

Kab: Don’t underestimate us humans.

Converse charged at Kab at unnaturally speed. Kab could barely react to it yet his dragon instincts took over and block the attack with his jaw. Kab suddenly heard a voice in his head it was the dragon that he slayed twice.

Dragon Voice: Since were sharing the same body I won’t let you die.

Kab: I’m really starting to hate you converse, forcing me to work with my greatest enemy.

Converse: I love to make people suffer then to kill them.

Kab: Then it’s about time that I return the favor.

Converse: I’m waiting.

Kab flapped his wings and charged at Converse. Converse simply turned into a bunch of bats and Kab sword missed them.

Kab: I got you now.

Kab suddenly shot a fire ball hitting all the bats. The bats were completely destroyed.

Kab: That was too easy. Now revive yourself.

Converse began to regenerator. His body completely reformed in three seconds.

Kab: I understand magic quite well and that power isn’t magic but divine will of God. Meaning you truly did drink the exiler and can’t be killed.

Converse: Do you see now? So why don’t you just give up and turn into a vampire?

Kab suddenly grew two fangs from his face. The transformation was almost complete. He was almost a full fledge vampire. It would be hours before the sun set. He was at a disadvantage. Converse charge at Kab with his fangs ready to bite him this time it was much faster then before. It was the same attack that Katoru had used on him when they first meet. Kab put his wings in front of himself blocking the attack. He then used his wings to push Converse back. Converse was push back several feet only to have a fireball hit him.

Kab: I didn’t know I could shot fireballs out of my own mouth.

Converse: That hurts. I won’t forgive you for this. As death I sentence you to hell.

Kab: You may be immortal but I’m unbeatable.

Converse: Getting overconfident aren’t we.

Every time Kab attacked him he would expose himself to the sunlight causing him self to get brunt and re-heal himself. This was going to drain all his energy. He couldn’t defeat converse. He was simply just too strong.

Converse: Why don’t you just give up? It’s pointless. The only you will accomplish is dieing.

Kab: How about you shut up.

Converse: Don’t speak to you’re master like that.

Kab: What do you mean by that?

Converse: Once I turn you into a vampire you will call me master just like all vampires will.

Kab: I have no time for this.

Kab suddenly jump into the air and began to fly away.

Converse: Oh no you don’t.

Converse turn into a bunch of bats and which followed Kab.

Kab: Look’s like you’re the one who doesn’t seem to learn.

Kab shot two fire balls. One from his own mouth and one from his right hand.

Converse began to regenerate but his body was on the ground. Kab had gotten away.

Converse: Blast. We will meet again. Next time I will be victories.

Kab teeth returned back to normal. The vampire effect was gone. The fight had taken a lot out of him. Kab landed on a small nearby island. He feels asleep beside a tree.

Back at the battlefield were Kab and Converse began to fight.

1st Knight: He was here.

5th Knight: After Kab we will have to report his fight with the vampire.

2nd knight (female): Why? It was just a pure blood vampire. It’s not like he got turned.

5th Knight: This vampire is known as converse. Not even the 6th angel could defeat him.

1st Knight: Yet Kab survived a fight with him.

3rd Knight (elf): I guess that’s why we weren’t sent to capture him. Anyone with that power should not be allowed to fall into the power of darkness and evil.

4th knight (female elf): Then let’s move.

[Necrosis]

Chapter 20
Blood Rage

Katoru (In his thoughts): He isn’t that strong. If I killed him right now and stole his sword then I can rule the entire world.

Alex 2nd: You ok there, Katoru?

Katoru: I’m fine, just a little tired.

Katoru (In his thoughts): I can feel Kab blood in my veins, giving me power. Turning me into a god.

Alex 2nd turned to see what was wrong with Katoru. Instead he saw Katoru in the air actually trying to stab him right in the neck. Alex 2nd appeared behind Katoru with his back facing him.

Alex 2nd: Not bad, you actually have me fooled. I thought you were actually going to join me.

Katoru body splits in half.

Alex 2nd: I regret killing you. You would have been a valuable ally in my quest and crusade.

Alex 2nd put his sword away, walking away from Katoru corpses. Suddenly there was a great pain in his neck. Katoru was actually biting his neck and sucking his blood.

Katoru: Blood, Blood, BLOOD!

Katoru suddenly stop. He began to spit out all the blood that he had been sucking from Alex 2nd.

Katoru: Silver?

Alex 2nd: “I guess having silver in my blood taste horrible, especially to a half vampire like you.

Katoru: “How?”

Alex 2nd realized that Katoru had been completely consumed by his vampire instincts. Most of his human intelligence was gone. All there was left in him was his hungry for blood.

Alex 2nd: It’s all thanks to my own sword. It grants me the power equally to that of an all powerfully Angel.

Katoru suddenly grew two vampires like wings from his back. This wasn’t part of any vampire transformation. Alex would need to get some in order to figure out what was going on with Katoru.

Alex 2nd: Not good.

They both charged at each other. Katoru used his two new wings to increase his speed. They both swung there swords and jump in the air. Alex 2nd landed on the ground. There was no blood on his sword. As for Katoru his sword had some blood on it yet he felt a sudden pain in his right wing. The top half of it fell off yet there was no blood. It began to regenerator quickly.

Katoru: Time to end this. Judgment!

Suddenly everything went dark. All the light focus on Katoru. His body began to fly a feet above the ground and suddenly all his skin started to burn. Alex jump into the air and cut Katoru arm off.

Alex 2nd: So that’s it. Kab blood is what’s doing this to you. If you were a human it would have been easier to deal with. Yet since you are a half vampire you’re blood absorbs it and creates more of the same blood type. Meaning that you will always have Kab blood in you until you die.

Alex 2nd: That also explains why you can heal from my attacks. Only a dragon or a more powerfully creatures can heal from my attacks just as celestials and dragon hybrids.

Katoru flew in the sky. He put his hand and suddenly a black and red energy was gathering in his hand.

Alex 2nd: I have to end this now.

Alex 2nd jump into the air. His speed was faster then a dragon. Katoru got ready to fire but it was too late. Alex 2nd had cut his heart in half. The silver spread through Katoru entire body. Katoru returned back to his normal self.

Katoru: What happened?

Alex 2nd: You don’t remember?

Katoru: No, yet I feel a dark power deep inside of me running in my blood. I also feel weak and strong at the same time. It seems like silver. What’s silver doing in my blood right now?

Alex 2nd: It’s a long story.

Elsewhere.

1st Knight: Were getting close. We should make our move now.

5th Knight: No, if we go now then we and Kab will all die. We need to let him fight and then after the fight we will step in.

4th Knight (female elf): What will he be fighting?

5th Knight: The enemy of good and evil.

[Necrosis]

Chapter 21
Brotherhood

Kab continued to walk on his lonely journey. Unsure what to look for in his long journey into nowhere. Wondering like a person who had lost all hopes. A person without a destiny and no where to go but to oblivion. Suddenly he felt something dark. Something evil no it was something not evil but just as dark. He looked in the sky and saw a dragon but it was black. He had never heard of a black dragon before. He had studied dragons his entire life how could he not know about this.

Red Dragon (voice): My brother but last time I saw him he was a red dragon. I don’t know what happened to him.

Kab: Have you ever heard of a black dragon before.

Red Dragon (voice): No, I never knew they existed.

Black Dragon: So brother looks like you got killed while I become even stronger.

Kab: You’re brother and I wonder how you got stronger?

Black Dragon: Simply I made a deal with a certain celestial being.

Kab: Lucifer?

Black Dragon: No I made a deal with the Angel of Death brother.

Kab: The Angel of Death has a brother?

Black Dragon: Yes and his powers are even greater.

Kab: So then why have you come here?

Black Dragon: To kill you. You stole our family pride now I shall take it back.

Kab: I already killed one Dragon what makes you think you will be different.

Black Dragon: Cause I am different!

Kab: Then show me.

Black Dragon shot a black fire ball at him. Kab suddenly appeared behind the dragon and was ready to cut off the Dragon head. Just as he swung his sword it went right through the Dragon. Kab right arm suddenly disappeared and the reaming part of his arm was bleeding like hell.

Kab: What the hell?

Black Dragon: Now do you see the power that I have. How you killed my brother surprises me.

Kab arm began to regenerate and quickly grew back.

Black Dragon: Pretty impressive I must say. That explains how you killed my brother. You could have faked your death and killed him.

Kab: I killed your brother twice. Now let me show you my true power.

Suddenly Kab began to transform into a Dragon Hybrid.

Black Dragon: So it looks like you also stole my brothers power to.

Kab: “Now see my true power. I open the gates of Heaven and Hell at the same time. Release the souls that are trap in me. Let them live once again and let them make others see the face of death. I open my gates that hold them. Now show your self’s those who defy death.”

Suddenly Rick, Katherine, Kyle, Trin, Kathy, Eliza and the Red Dragon appeared.

Eliza: Kab it’s about time you summoned us. I was getting bored.

Kab threw his sword to Eliza.

Kab: I won't need that.

Kathy: Enough talk we need to defeat that Dragon. Dragocus!

Suddenly another Red Dragon appeared.

Kathy: Let’s see you defeat two red dragons.

Black Dragon: You vastly under estimate me.

The two dragons both charged at the black dragon. The black dragon shots a huge black flame at them. Yet the two dragons respond by shooting there own flames. The two flames were equally match. Everyone just started in shock with the power of these dragons. The Black Dragon then made his flame even larger and overpowered the two other dragons. The two dragons began to be burned by the dark flames as it slowly consumed there bodies. The Black Dragon then appeared behind its brother and bites his neck and snapped it. The Red Dragon died and its body turned into a red like energy which entered the black Dragon. The black Dragon then shot a huge flame at the other red dragon completely burning it. The other red Dragon also turned into a red energy and entered the black dragon.

Black Dragon: Now I am even stronger then before.

Kathy: Not bad yet dragon are only one of a God Wizards many abilities.

Dragon: You think a human can defeat me?

Kathy: There is a reason why we are called GOD wizards.

The dragon charged at Kathy but she summoned a wall of Ice to block his path. The Black Dragon shot a huge black flame but it had little effect. Kathy then summoned a huge blizzard with Ice spears as big as 7 feet.

Black Dragon: Curse you.

Kathy: Deal with it.

Black Dragon: With the dead and the rotting and let you’re flow end and you’re powers cease.

Kathy magically attacks suddenly disappeared. Her Ice wall fell apart.

Kathy: A curse.

Black Dragon: Exactly. Now without you’re magic you’re useless.

The Black Dragon then shot a huge flame at Kathy. Suddenly Kab was in the way block the flame with his two wings.

Kab: Let’s see how you do against me.

Kab then flew at the Black Dragon. The black dragon shot a flame at him but Kab used his mouth and his right hand to shot two flames at the black dragon. There was a large explosion. Kab then flew through the flames and went in for the kill but the dragon countered attack with a bite. Kab used his two hands to keep the dragon mouth from closing.

Kab: Now Eliza, kill him!

Eliza: My pleasure.

Eliza used Kab Sword to cut off the Dragon head.

The Black Dragon head flew off. Kab and Kathy both landed on the ground.

Black Dragon: “Well looks like you defeated me with the help of your love.”

Eliza and Kab both blush at the same time. They had always kept there love a secret and they hadn’t been together for to long.

Black Dragon: “Looks like I’m not ready to die so I’ll just do what my brother did and live inside of you.”

The Black Dragon then turned into a black energy and entered Kab body.

Eliza: Will see you later Kab.

Eliza and the others disappeared.

Kab fell on the ground asleep. He was tired from all the fighting.

5th Knight: Now we can make our move. Get ready to capture him. He managed to defeat the dragon meaning he is pretty powerfully but weakened at this time.

[Necrosis]

Chapter 22
Satan Wrath

Several of the knights jump down. Each ready to do there part. Each trained to do whatever it take to win. Each bless by the heavens. Each of them ready to die for the greater good of there faith. Three of them landed near Kab. They took out there swords ready to pin Kab to the ground. They stab there swords at Kab. Yet they miss. Kab was now in the air and spin kick two of them.

Kab: So who are you and what do you want from me?

5th Knight: We have been ordered to capture you by the 1st angel. You will come one way or the other. I suggest you surrender. There is no way you can hope to win.

Kab: I don’t need hope. I already know that I’m going to win.

The 1st knight charged at Kab and swung his sword. Kab blocked it but the man was pretty strong. Each time he strikes it felt as if he was being hit by ten knights.

Kab: You’re pretty strong but!

Kab dodged the attack and kicks the man. He was going to stab him but suddenly his sword was deflected. It was the 2nd Knight, she had block Kab attack with her two handed sword. She then charge at Kab. She swung her sword at much faster speed. She wasn’t as strong but much quicker then the other Knight. Kab used his strength and began to overpower her. She could block his attacks but Kab kept the pressure on her. He then saw her get tried and put more force in this attack. He swung his sword yet she blocks it but her sword was sent flying into the air.

Kab: It’s over for you!

Kab got ready to deliver the finishing blow but yet another Knight block it.

Kab: You guys are getting annoying.

The 3rd knight charged at him he swung his sword. Kab blocks the attack and countered attack but the man was pretty quick and strong. He was in between the two knights he fought before. Suddenly another knight came in. She had two swords and was faster then all the knights he fought before. The two of them were working together. The male elf kept the pressure on him while the female elf attack him while he was busy fighting the other elf. Kab blocks the male elf attack but the female elf stab him in the stomach.

Kab: That’s it. It’s time to use more of my power.

Suddenly three flame hydra heads appeared. The charged down at the two knights. The flames completely destroyed everything in there path. The smoke began to clear. The two knights were completely unharmed. There was a third Knight.

5th Knight: Looks like I will have to do this.

The 5th Knight charged at Kab. He swung his sword. His skill, speed and strength where the same as Kab. Kab and the Knight were equally. Neither could get a hit. Suddenly a ball of ice appeared in Kab left hand. Kab began to laugh. He swung his sword at the half elf but the half elf dodged it. Yet Kab swung his left hand hitting the half elf freezing his outer skin.

5th Knight: Dang. This is slowing me down.

Kab swung his sword but 5 knights block the attack. They all began to attack him. Soon the previous 4 knights also began to attack him. Each time Kab would block an attack he would be hit by another two. Soon he had cut around his whole body. He couldn’t beat them all. At least not in this form.

Kab: Time to get serious.

2nd Knight: What?

Kab suddenly began to transform into his dragon hybrid from. His skin turned red, a dragon head replace his right hand. He had once again turned into his dragon hybrid from.

Kab: Now try to defeat me.

The knights charged at Kab but Kab simply opened his dragon mouth and let out a blast of fire. All the other knights where push back but the 5th knight came out of the flame and swung his sword at Kab. Kab right hand simply bites the sword.

Kab: To easy.

5th Knight: No way.

Kab: You see. There is no way for you to defeat me. I told you that I would win.

5th Knight: Maybe I cannot defeat you but can you defeat Satan himself?

Kab: Satan? As in the devil? As in Lucifer?

5th Knight: Like most people you get Satan and Lucifer mix up. They are two completely different people. Lucifer is the devil as for Satan he is the one of the angels who shows all our mistakes. Now feel his judgment. I call upon the power of Satan. Make my body a vessel of your wrath. I am blessed by both the angels and you’re god. Now use him to pass your judgment on this human.

Suddenly the 5th knight grew two angel wings. A sword appeared in his hand. His clothes became white. His eyes where red.

5th Knight (deep voice): Kab, I know how you will destroy the light. I know that it will be you who kills all the angels. You must be stop here.

Kab: Kill an angel? That is impossible.

5th Knight: I am Satan. I have seen the future and as long as you exist the darkness will never go away.

5th Knight charged at Kab. Kab barely had time to block the attack. He was sent flying 50 feet back. He began to get up only to see the 5th Knight already there ready to kill him. Kab rolled out of the way while the 5th Knight tried to stab him. Kab tried to bite him with his right hand but 5th Knight simply cut it off. Kab arm began to regenerate. The 5th Knight stab him right in the heart. Kab fell on his knees.

Kab: This cannot be.

Black Dragon (voice): I won’t let you die yet.

Kab: What?

Black Dragon (voice): I hate celestials more then you. So I will grant you my power in order to defeat them.

Suddenly Kab skin turned black, two dragon heads appeared on his shoulders. The one on his hand was gone.

5th Knight: What? What is this power?

Kab: It is the power of Chaos.

Kab two dragon heads then bite the 5th Knights shoulders. The 5th Knight cut off the two heads. Kab then stabs the 5th knight in the chest with his own hands. The 5th Knight jump back examining his wounds.

5th Knight: This isn’t going to be easy.

Kab two dragons head had already regrown. Kab then charged at the 5th Knight. The 5th Knight then swung his sword.

5th Knight: Judgment from the Heavens and Angels.

Out of the right hand of the 5th Knight came a huge bright light which hit Kab. Kab was sent flying 100 feet into the air. The 5th Knight appeared and stabbed Kab right in the chest. He then kicks Kab off his sword sending him flying into the ground. The 5th knight then flew after Kab. Kab then shot two fireballs from his two dragon heads. The 5th Knight was hit by this. He kept flying towards Kab even though he had brunt marks and was badly injured.

5th Knight: Now you will die. Wings of the Angel!
(Note: Wings of the Angel is an attack that instantly kills the caster when the attack is finish as a result it sends the enemy soul to the after life and destroys the body. It is considered the ultimate attack).

Kab: What?

The 5th Knight hit Kab resulting in a huge flash of light. Kab then got up. The 5th Knight was gone.

6th Knight: What he actually survived the wings of the angel?

1st Knight: He is weakened kill him.

The nine knights charged at him. Kab felt very weak but he used his remaining energy to shot two huge fireballs at them. Killing them all right away. Kab fell down. He was now asleep and very close to death.

Kab: I’m back here? Back in my soul. I fell so weak why?

Eliza: We each gave up half our soul to make sure the attack wouldn’t kill you but it wasn’t enough. Even with the dragons help half of your soul was sent to the after life.

Kab: What? This can’t… be.

Suddenly the angel of death appeared. He was wearing a block clock. He had a scythe in his arms and a dagger in his clock. He also had a crow on his right shoulder.

Angel of Death began to walk towards Kab then suddenly a girl appeared. She had grey hair. The Angel of Death looks at her and then left.

Girl: Now you are strong enough.

Kab: That voice. You’re the one from my dreams. What is it that you want?

[Necrosis]

Chapter 23
Balance

Girl: Fight me! Join me!

Kab: What? Why do you want to fight me and why should I join…

Kab fell on the ground. With half his soul gone he was now extremely weak, barely alive.

Girl: It’s not a fair fight if you’re half dead. I guess I will have to heal you.

Kab: How can you heal half a soul?

The girl began to heal Kab soul. Kab began felt even stronger then ever before.

Girl: I think I made your soul stronger. Who cares?

Kab got up.

Kab: Thanks…

The girl suddenly punches him. Kab was sent flying into a large rock.

Kab: “What was that for?”

Girl: Fight me. Let me show you true power.

Kab: I do have power.

Kab suddenly felt a huge amount of pain on his face, right leg and his chest.

Kab: What the hell was that?

Girl: You’re going to have to fight me with your full power. You didn’t even see me attack did you?

Kab skin turned black. Two dragon heads appeared on his shoulder. Wings appeared on his back. Kab flew into the air. Kab and the two dragon’s heads both started to make a fireball. They shoot the Fireball at the girl. The three fireballs combine creating a deadly force.

Kab: Even an Angel would be hurt by that attack.

Girl: Very impressive.

Kab: What you’re still alive?

Girl suddenly punches Kab in the gut and then went for a spin kick. Kab managed to block her attack and then went for a counter attack but the girl simply counter Kab counter attack and threw him into a the ground. Kab used his wings to get back up.

Kab: All your attacks are perfectly executed. There isn’t a single flaw in them. The only people who fight like that are celestials.

The girl then took out a spear. It had a cross at the end. She suddenly appeared behind Kab.

Kab: “Damn that was fast. I barely saw it. I couldn’t block or dodge in time.

Girl: “You actually saw it impressive.”

Kab fell to the ground knock out.

He then woke up. The girl was standing beside him but now she had two fallen angel wings on her. She was a celestial, a fallen angel!

Kab: You’re a fallen Angel?

Abraxas: My name is Abraxas, I am a DevilAngel. I posses all the powers of light and darkness in a perfect union. The light requires the darkness and the darkness requires the light. Will you join me? I can show you the way of Balance.

Kab: I shall join you.

Abraxas: Good. Now you’re training will begin, we shall find the lovers. It’s been a while since I saw them. They will gladly help with your training.

Kab: The lovers?

Abraxas: The angel and devil that fell in love and used there combine power to escape from hell. It is by watching them that I found this power.

Kab: I never heard that story.

Abraxas: It is not told since it would not benefit the light nor the darkness.

They soon made there journey searching for the lovers.
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[Tamkalost]

to be honest you keep switching between styles of writing and it really made me lose interest, also the dialog sections really could use some work in presentation

blah: speaks

blah2: speaks

really isnt a recommended format in which to show dialog, sure if it was a script for a drama or play then it would be fine but in this case not so much because it gives the impression 2 robots are talking, the space in between them puts a gap which isnt supposed to be there in the readers head, some people find this hard to do properly but try reading your writing not as the author but as a reader

again the action is also a bit robotic

blah does this, blah2 does that, he does this, she does that

try using adjectives and adverbs to spice it up a little

[hellfishfirefly]

tamkalost...i know it somewhat treu , but what un ask is unrealistic for him to do..

look at how much he has written and ppl are interested in it....
if u have writtin this much proves that he is verry interested in it so...lets just let him write his way

[Necrosis]

LOL. I though I would never have two fans arguing about my story. Yet I can handle critism. I guess I could add some adverbs in it to make it better. The Celestials (Angels, devils and etc) are suppose to sound like robats but I guess I could changed the other characters.
@hellfishfirefly
Thanks for defending me.
Edit: The reason I put spaces between the lines is to make easier for the reader to read. You can always copy and paste this in microsoft word and remove the spaces. How many people would rather see no space or would you want to keep the spaces. Please post and tell me your thoughts also if you have some critism please tell me.

[hellfishfirefly]

i also use spaces to aply for better reason , but to be honest i have read just half a chapter , its not ur problem its mine , no mater what i read i tend to black out in interest everytime , i hope i can finish reading up ur storry

[Onslaught King]

Yo bro, it's cool but it's kind of scripted. But good after all. Are you in the contest? If so make sure you add (OMSWC) to the title. Read mine!!

[Necrosis]

No I'm not in the contest. This was made way before the contest.